Orange October

Orange October

The words orange and October 
surely a unity made in heaven
Giant pumpkin faces that  light 
the way up darkly garden paths.

Orange ghoulish faces, grin like
cut throat pirates, looking for 
new victims. Candles flicker in 
their eyes like woken evil spirits 

Halloween approaches , battered orange 
leaves that change like chameleons 
wait for their final flight. 
Destination earth .

Hot orange coloured broths , steam 
filled kitchens and chunky doorstop
bread yanked angrily by hungry mouths 

Awakened furnaces and coal fires 
attack and spit at cold spirits 
that threaten darkened studies 

the month of trick or treats 
a sudden nasty slap of frost 
filled air leaves reddened cheeks
embarrassed . 

Sunday night gentle drama watching
heartbeat springs to mind. Orange 
October sounds like a soothing 
chocolate bar, cosy pub bars 
where locals gather and talk turns
to "it's getting parky out there "
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Roberts Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 9:53 PM
congrats on your win Michael , beautiful imagery
George   Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 1:38 PM
Beautiful, Michael. Many congrats on your fine win.Lainey
Pennell  Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 12:39 PM
good Halloween poem enjoy the soup stephen
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October 25, 2016 at 5:21 PM
Michael,,,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Dalei Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 2:23 AM
Brilliant.......Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love...........//Manmath
Sands Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 2:00 PM
Good one all through! I like the Giant pumpkin faces line and nasty slap of frost lines.
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