Robert Pettit Poet Light Verse

Orange Juice

Orange juice is in America. 
Some comes from down south in Florida. 
More is found west in California. 
I don't always need vodka.

The first poetry form I have invented.  It's called a "nonoku".
inspired by another member's poem

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Skat A March 29, 2014 at 4:43 PM Robert, CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN..... Awesome poem!! Luv ~SKAT~

Sheri Fresonke Harper March 26, 2014 at 10:54 AM Hi Robert, really wished to know more about this new form. This is a fun take on orange juice, freshly squeezed is best. Congratulations on your win. Thanks much for entering my contest. Sorry I'm a little late saying so!

Dr.Ram Mehta March 22, 2014 at 10:12 PM Very clever creation, Congrats on the fine win, robert

Paul Callus March 6, 2014 at 12:18 PM Good and witty. I will second your "nonoku" :) // paul

Skat A March 5, 2014 at 9:21 PM I love it, Robert, how about the grapefruit. Texas Pride, and yes with vodka. LOL. :) I love my OJ..... PS..... I like that you have your own form. SKAT. Robert Pettit March 5, 2014 at 9:22 PM How long does it usually take poetrysoup to acknowledge new poetry forms? Will they ever accept this one?