Orange Crush the Adventures of Soda Pop Vi

As requested here is another episode. If this is your first time reading, check out the first one it will make more sense. Let me know if you would like me to continue. Those who are following the tale, thanks!

When I awoke Ricky was fast asleep, being a pop bottle I have no way of keeping my eyes closed. Mind you I'm not complaining, I got to see the most amazing sunrise. I so wanted Ricky to enjoy it as well so I refracted the light and shone it on his eyes. I could tell he was a bit irritated but it had the desired effect, he got out of bed so he could move me. As he walked over to the window I could feel the irritation turn to wonder as he saw the beauty of the sunrise. From that day forward he became a morning person.

Ricky stood there for a while with me held dangling by his side. I no longer needed my glass, I could see clearly through his blue eyes. It was a very nice street and Ricky particularly liked the house across the street. The house had bright white siding and a manicured lawn. There were also planters with all kinds of pretty flowers. The house was owned by an older couple and they didn't have any children. It seemed a rather big house for only two people.

Soon Roy and Teresa were also awake and they all fought to use the one and only bathroom. Mom and Dadio had already left for work, Dadio to cut hair and Mom as a waitress at the Coffee Cup. Their baby sitter's name was Mrs. Burns an older lady that seemed very fond of floral print dresses. She had made her way up the stairs because the kids didn't seem to hear her call them for breakfast. They all ran past her to the dining room table and waited for her to slowly make her way back down the stairs. She may not have been fleet of foot but boy what a great breakfast. Bacon eggs and saugage as well as orange juice. Ricky tried to pour the orange juice into me but got almost as much on the table. Still it was quite a treat for me to enjoy, after all breakfast is the most important meal of the day.

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Date: 1/18/2015 2:35:00 AM
I'm not sure why, but this got me thinking of the book and movie "The Polar Express". Maybe because they both have that wonderful childhood innocence and nostalgia about them... You would make a great author of children's books!
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Date: 1/10/2015 5:14:00 PM
ahhh, more of the story here!! Just had to see the next part, and later I will read that other one you have posted! He is a wise bottle to know that breakfast is an important meal of the day.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/10/2015 6:40:00 PM
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Date: 1/7/2015 10:05:00 PM
Very well done Rick... I like this story. Verlean
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/10/2015 6:44:00 PM
Thanks Verlena.
Date: 1/6/2015 11:51:00 PM
I love to watch the sunrise like Ricky too..Its the closest step to my creator..Hello sweet bottle..Im getting fond of you too.Might tug ofwar with Ricky to have you: )
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/7/2015 8:52:00 AM
*lol* I am sure Soda Pop would go willingly!
Date: 1/2/2015 4:18:00 PM
Another enjoyable day with Soda pop and Ricky.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/5/2015 1:17:00 PM
Hi Brenda, I am pleased you enjoyed it. Hopefully if all this snow lets up I will add a installment tomorrow.
Date: 1/2/2015 10:18:00 AM
As enjoyable as the previous parts, and getting to know you better. You also subtly teach as you recount. All the best. // paul
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/2/2015 11:42:00 AM
Thanks for continuing to read my story Paul!
Date: 1/1/2015 5:07:00 PM
I was referring to Charles Dickens, here is a quote from wiki, "His novels, most published in monthly or weekly instalments, pioneered the serial publication of narrative fiction, which became the dominant Victorian mode for novel publication" Quite a humanist in his own right ( like you ) Here is the wiki- http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Charles_Dickens
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Date: 1/1/2015 4:52:00 AM
Soda Pop isn't the only one who enjoys seeing things out of Ricky's blue eyes...He has company in me. Lovely write....I am a morning person too.... hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/1/2015 7:30:00 AM
My Sweetie is always amazed at how I simply pop awake ready to enjoy the day. I can't remember the last time I slept in.
Date: 1/1/2015 12:49:00 AM
And on that note, I will have something to show you and Ricky soon.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/1/2015 7:31:00 AM
You have me waiting in anticipation Arthur!
Date: 1/1/2015 12:30:00 AM
wow, love this, now I will ask you, do you know who else wrote like this? Someone famous!!!! I mean sort of like installments! Happy New Year
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/1/2015 7:33:00 AM
No But I am curious, who are you thinking about?
Date: 12/31/2014 6:16:00 PM
This is amazing,kudos and happy new year Richard...huggs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/31/2014 7:42:00 PM
Thanks Kayode you as well and a big hug back!
Date: 12/31/2014 3:28:00 PM
You are a natural. Great story telling always captivates me, and I always enjoy reading this continuing story. Looking forward to the next one. All the best for 2015.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/31/2014 7:48:00 PM
You as well Maurice, your presence at the soup this past year has been tremendous!
Date: 12/31/2014 3:21:00 PM
This soda pop bottle, certainly has some adventures! Orange juice mixed with orange crush...hmmm...too bad Ricky had previously cleaned out the bottle; it might have been a whole new taste sensation!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/31/2014 7:49:00 PM
Thanks M.L.
Date: 12/31/2014 2:50:00 PM
Sorry for not visiting... I will fix that! You are a very talented writer, my friend! Must go back and read the previous ones as well! Cheers, Jack
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/31/2014 4:33:00 PM
Thanks Jack!
Date: 12/31/2014 11:59:00 AM
Soda Pop is quite correct: breakfast is the most important meal of the day! Nice work, Richard; most entertaining!! :) john. P.s Have a wonderful New Year!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/31/2014 12:21:00 PM
Thanks John.
Date: 12/31/2014 11:37:00 AM
Happy New Year from the Eastman's. Your Soda Pop series seems a sojourn into our own once young... and past times...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/31/2014 12:21:00 PM
Indeed it is!
Date: 12/31/2014 10:36:00 AM
Your talent, obvious. Your writing excellent! Happy New Year!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/31/2014 11:13:00 AM
Thanks Demetrios! You as well my friend.
Date: 12/31/2014 9:45:00 AM
Bravo...loved it Richard....could it be foreshadowing that Ricky moves into that house across the street one day.....I'll have to stay tuned......
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/31/2014 9:52:00 AM
Nope but he will be moving!
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