John Lawless Poet Choka

Orange Crush

ORANGE CRUSH

crushed beneath the fall
visions lost in foggy dreams
bloodied trees in orange robes
distorting angels
trumpeting hallelujah
fog’s gray stone blocks the sunrise


John G. Lawless
9/18/2014
for Dr. Ram Mehta – Choka Me – Poetry Contest

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Reason A. Poteet September 29, 2014 at 5:46 PM Had to read your entry John, a most unusual choka...congratulations on your honorable, I would have placed it higher, too.

Andrea Dietrich September 27, 2014 at 9:38 PM wow, this is really good and creative imagery. One of the better ones. Gosh, for me in top three. Congrats on your win.

Faye Gibson September 27, 2014 at 2:19 PM John, this is great....a top of the list for me. Congrats.

Richard Lamoureux September 27, 2014 at 8:46 AM One of the best! Congrats.

Paul Callus September 27, 2014 at 6:43 AM Great imagery here, John! Excellent choka. Congrats on a fine win! // paul

Dr.Ram Mehta September 27, 2014 at 5:42 AM Thanks for the entry and support. Congrats on the win, John

Daver Austin September 23, 2014 at 1:39 PM A touch of dies irae here, I enjoyed the mood. daver

Dorian Petersen Potter September 19, 2014 at 3:34 AM Nice Choka! Love the imagery!

Dimestore Shoes September 19, 2014 at 1:24 AM beautiful language and imagery..