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Orange Crush

ORANGE CRUSH crushed beneath the fall visions lost in foggy dreams bloodied trees in orange robes distorting angels trumpeting hallelujah fog’s gray stone blocks the sunrise John G. Lawless 9/18/2014 for Dr. Ram Mehta – Choka Me – Poetry Contest

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Date: 9/29/2014 5:46:00 PM
Had to read your entry John, a most unusual choka...congratulations on your honorable, I would have placed it higher, too.
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Date: 9/27/2014 9:38:00 PM
wow, this is really good and creative imagery. One of the better ones. Gosh, for me in top three. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/27/2014 2:19:00 PM
John, this is great....a top of the list for me. Congrats.
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Date: 9/27/2014 8:46:00 AM
One of the best! Congrats.
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Date: 9/27/2014 6:43:00 AM
Great imagery here, John! Excellent choka. Congrats on a fine win! // paul
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Date: 9/27/2014 5:42:00 AM
Thanks for the entry and support. Congrats on the win, John
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Date: 9/23/2014 1:39:00 PM
A touch of dies irae here, I enjoyed the mood. daver
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Date: 9/19/2014 3:34:00 AM
Nice Choka! Love the imagery!
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Date: 9/19/2014 1:24:00 AM
beautiful language and imagery..
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