Orange Blossoms

Orange blossoms waft a scent of expectation of juice down the chin For the contest: Apples? Oranges? Placement: 3rd

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/1/2011 6:12:00 PM

PAULA.!~ CONGRATULATIONS!! with your poem in CAROL'S contest:-) I'm glad you where among all her chosen winners. Keep posting your good poems,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/29/2011 11:14:00 PM

awesome expression of your desire for that orange, Paula. Congrats on your top place!

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 5/29/2011 2:02:00 PM

All my senses were aroused with this vivid picture. Congratulations on your well-deserved placement. :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/28/2011 11:43:00 PM

a crowning glory! big cheeers for the high spot in the contest, paula.... :) huggs

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/28/2011 8:33:00 PM

Congrats Paula on your super win in Carol's contest.. another beauty my friend.. enjoy with luv..

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/28/2011 8:28:00 PM

Oh, I like it..congrats on your win..the juice always does end up on the chin..lol. BG

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/28/2011 7:07:00 PM

Hi Paula- Need a napkin? ha ha. This is great with the "scent of expectation"--awaiting the apple harvest is definitely the best part! Congrats! Gwendolen

Joseph Osita

Date: 5/28/2011 3:47:00 PM

Congrats on your 3rd place win in Carol's contest