Or Is It the Tulips

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Driving by, 
lost on a side street
directly in the middle
of where I never wanted to be

Clamoring at the expectations
strewn along the curb
between the broken dishwasher
and empty beer cans

Where neighborhood gnomes
painted gaily colors
wave as if they know me,
but I ignore them - sort of

There is one though
with a hollow bookish smile
that seems familiar
or is it the tulips

Your porch used to look like that
but this door is standing open
behind a welcome mat with a clover,
wish I hadn’t lost that rabbit’s foot

Maybe I am lucky after all,
just found a spot with ten minutes
remaining on the meter, forget it, 
it took me fifteen minutes to park

The empty passenger seat
still holds your form,
at least I can see it -
Corinthian leather never forgets

A speed bump at 40 mph
rattles me back behind the wheel
when I see the bank clock flashes 5:00 pm,
still offering a free toaster

And that’s it, another Sunday afternoon
wasted as much as I am,
spinning my wheels 
with just enough gas to get back home,

alone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Kitchin Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 8:10 AM
Love this, it is intriguing and full of emotion, excellently penned! :)
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September 9, 2019 at 12:21 PM
Thank you Tania so very much. I appreciate your nice comment today
Andresen Avatar
September 7, 2019 at 3:40 PM
- A wonderful writing, Chris ... feels so real ... - or is it the tulips ? - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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September 9, 2019 at 12:21 PM
It could be those tulips. : ) Thanks so much my friend.
Babcock Avatar
September 7, 2019 at 1:33 PM
I like the feel to this poem with vivid details can almost feel you driving along all alone. Nicely written. love phyl
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September 9, 2019 at 12:20 PM
Thank you so much Phyllis. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one
Dietrich Avatar
September 7, 2019 at 10:28 AM
this seems a different style from you. ... BUT, I love it too!! Excellent verse, Chris.
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September 9, 2019 at 12:20 PM
Thank you Andrea. I do try to change it up from time to time. I appreciate your kindness
Hamilton Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 9:50 PM
This is magnificent writing Chris, storytelling with vivid details draws me in every time, Corinthian leather never forgets...classic line!
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September 9, 2019 at 12:19 PM
Thanks John. Nope, it never forgets. Glad you enjoyed this
Sands Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 2:44 PM
This is the type of poem that stands out in the mind and stays there , Chris. I can see it and feel it. You write so well, reaching the reader. I like the gnomes waving as if they know you. :)
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September 9, 2019 at 12:18 PM
Thank you Heidi. It was just something I was feeling at the time. I am happy you liked it
Blade Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 12:44 PM
Hey Chris! I haven't been on poetry soup in so long! Happy to see that you're consistently writing and continuing to inspire with your words. This is truly a beautiful, yearning poem. My favorite line is "The empty passenger seat still holds your form". You always write with such painstakingly beautiful imagery! Have a great day
Green Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 1:39 PM
Hey Iris, I just came back on a few weeks ago myself. Thank you so much for your kind words and for remembering me. That really makes me smile.
Pandit Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 12:43 PM
Your poems always leave a buzz..after I finish reading...sometimes a cry..sometimes a smile... always brilliantly penned. You have a gifted pen, Chris.
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September 6, 2019 at 1:38 PM
Thank you so much Vijay. What a nice thing to say. I appreciate your visit today
Allison Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 12:03 PM
aww Chris the sense of regret and loneliness is quite overwhelming... am far more used to your romantic lines/ Have a super weekend:-) hugs Jan xx
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September 6, 2019 at 1:30 PM
Thank you Jan. Not all storms produce rainbows, sometimes it is just dark clouds. Though it is a bit more sunny since you stopped by.
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September 6, 2019 at 11:54 AM
such a poignant piece, memories that haunt a mind, one can see the scene and not help but feel lost in the moment and pain....beautifully penned my friend :) hugs
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September 6, 2019 at 1:29 PM
Thank you so very much Sandy. Your wonderful comments are always a bright spot in my days. You opinion means a lot to me. Thank you again.
Chiri Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 11:14 AM
Ah Chris one can feel the longing and sadness in this one! I can no longer smile my heart goes out to you!;( you know What writes I prefer lol! Oh well maybe one day that Chris will write one again!;) maybe? ;) loved every yearning, wishing, and dreaming line!;)
Chiri Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 11:57 AM
That's so silly Chris why would no one not read this! Your poetry always gets read! I might break 100 views but that's it! Your gets over 100 the first few hours! ;) so silly my friend!;)
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September 6, 2019 at 11:21 AM
Thanks so much Brenda. I figured it was Friday and nothing much happens here on Fridays so why not post a sad lonely one. I really didn't expect anyone to read it. I'm glad you stopped by.
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