OR

Is it destined OR is it planned
Is it in the stars OR is it in the palm of our hands
do we have control OR are we puppets
can I ask for a choice OR are my decisions taken
am I capable OR am I just afraid
are my paths designed OR is it a maze
can I take a chance OR do I have to move on
shouldn't I've figured it out OR will it take forever
maybe now OR never.
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Sidwell Avatar
March 29, 2024 at 11:07 AM
Congratulations! I loved how you packed so much worthwhile content in such a bite sized poem! Very relatable!!
Dan Avatar
March 29, 2024 at 11:22 AM
Thank you so much! means a lot:)
Rodgers Avatar
March 27, 2024 at 4:29 AM
Congratulations, Natasha! I loved how you intricately navigated the complexities of fate and free will, provoking contemplation on life's uncertainties. The juxtaposition of questions amplifies the existential dilemma, inviting readers to ponder their own paths. Your profound reflection and thought-provoking words earned you victory in the poetry contest. Well done! - Blessings, Daniel
Dan Avatar
March 29, 2024 at 11:24 AM
thanks for the kind words, it really means a lot.
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