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Is it destined OR is it planned Is it in the stars OR is it in the palm of our hands do we have control OR are we puppets can I ask for a choice OR are my decisions taken am I capable OR am I just afraid are my paths designed OR is it a maze can I take a chance OR do I have to move on shouldn't I've figured it out OR will it take forever maybe now OR never.

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Robert Sidwell

Date: 3/29/2024 11:07:00 AM

Congratulations! I loved how you packed so much worthwhile content in such a bite sized poem! Very relatable!!

Nex Dan
Date: 3/29/2024 11:22:00 AM

Thank you so much! means a lot:)

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/27/2024 4:29:00 AM

Congratulations, Natasha! I loved how you intricately navigated the complexities of fate and free will, provoking contemplation on life's uncertainties. The juxtaposition of questions amplifies the existential dilemma, inviting readers to ponder their own paths. Your profound reflection and thought-provoking words earned you victory in the poetry contest. Well done! - Blessings, Daniel

Nex Dan
Date: 3/29/2024 11:24:00 AM

thanks for the kind words, it really means a lot.