Optimistic Orange

Memories accumulate with each passing year
Some dark with troubles, some marked with cheer
I would rather stay focused on the smallest of things
For these are the ones I can keep in control
When everyday problems have taken their toll

Outside the window is a little orange tree
The laughter of children is heard in the breeze
We can feel hearts surrender while looking at three
quirky round faces, that look back at me

There are three rotund oranges, lined up on the fence
Left from the children who were playing last week
They picked a few oranges right off our tree, 
then painted small faces, …  with smiles on their cheeks

They'll  remain there, to remind us that the happiness never leaves
So strange it seems, some things are meant
such little things. of no consequence
are the very same things, that might soon fade away,
but remain close to our hearts, the rest of our days

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3/5/16
For United Colors: Orange Contest
Sponsor: Silent One
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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March 14, 2016 at 11:50 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your orange theme win. always ~LINDA~
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March 7, 2016 at 5:25 PM
Fantastic orange has been sliced and the aroma lingers upon the winners’ page..Congrats on your outstanding work..Sara
La France Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 6:35 AM
Carrie, this is a sweet orange poem, I love it and CONGRATULATIONS on your great placement, 7~
Raven Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 7:38 PM
Hi Carrie, Congratulations on your placement in the contest. I enjoyed the read....Vlad.
Negron Flores Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 5:22 PM
Congratulations on your win Carrie
Scars Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 10:21 AM
Carrie, lovely imagery and flow...congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo *smiles*
Andresen Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 9:05 AM
- Carrie, congratulations on your win in contest: ORANGE - hugs // Anne-Lise:)
Turner Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 5:00 PM
Very optimistic approach, Carrie. Really love your style. I guess it is true that beauty is in the eyes of the beholder. Good luck! Peace dear lady:)
Allison Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 3:52 PM
lovely memories Carrie its amazing how these little moment stay with us:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Smith Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 3:43 PM
Sweet, optimistic and well done. Good luck in the contest. Charlie
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 3:16 PM
The little gifts like this become ingrained in memory, so true. I love how you tell your story with tender emotion Carrie. Your poem is memorable and I hope it takes top honors! #7 Love, Connie
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March 5, 2016 at 3:10 PM
Those faces on oranges brought a smile to my face.
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