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The day was tainted with bitterness. fueled by concealed emotions of wrath apprehensive over social rejection. afraid of enduring the same fate. The bedrock is utterly stained with blood. No one likes to face this conundrum. the most noxious fallacy to mankind ethics-based feelings of guilt or shame. Tonight, there's a tense vibe. a foreboding of impending violence Children have been bred to be harsh. given that nobody seems to care. Tonight, I'm going to rest my head. However, tension is present and active. pounding away at mental stability as it seems, I'm bold with getting nailed.  I shall rise soon with renewed vigor. and thriving considering people's faith since I've been using subpar tools to keep my hopes alive for my dreams.
Written: November 21, 2022 A Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 11/22/2022 5:39:00 AM
Optimism is what keeps us going. Inspiring write my friend.
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Date: 11/21/2022 10:54:00 PM
Optimism is important. Don't let yourself fall into depression.
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Date: 11/21/2022 7:41:00 PM
Keep hopes alive ! Though the poem began on a sad note, with hope, you have brought light over the murky state of mind . Great entry for the contest ! All the Brst, dear Lasaad !
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