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My words bestow you to a serene, blue sky. The clouds are fading as dusk awry. On that hill, all is peaceful. And soon more gleeful. Autumn's dawn. Leaves. The views drawn To each peak heedful. Swing leaves are joyful. Distant snowy peaks imply. My words bestow you to a serene, blue sky.
Written: October 3rd, 2021 Note: - Form: Andaree It is syllabic, with lines of 11/9/7/5/3/1/3/5/7/9/11 Rhyme Scheme: AabbcbcbbaA

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Date: 10/6/2021 5:54:00 AM
Autumn has at last dawned here, slight chill to the air speaks of seasonal change...Delice
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Date: 10/4/2021 7:43:00 PM
Masterfully crafted, a poem of eloquence and elegance! Love the beautiful picture, too.
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Date: 10/4/2021 4:58:00 AM
You created beautiful images, Lassad--in this difficult to execute form. Well done!
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Date: 10/4/2021 12:52:00 AM
A serene poem with great imagery.
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