Written on December 19, 2023
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6 lines from Firefly Memories (Terza Rima) As the night rolled into a darkness rich With glimmering fireflies, vibrant, quiet And happy, charming, able to bewitch I caught them in Mason jars that riot Lights going on and off, soft, so soothing Breathing graceful whispers that sigh “try it” 6 new lines (opposing the old poem) Despite the morning, crisp and ever fresh Pouring out her dawn past the mountain’s crests, Begetting goosebumps on our naked flesh Kissed by colors, beauty that time protests, Reflecting dew, trembling on butterflies, Lasting songs, rich as the morning suggests.
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