Opportunity

Oatmeal I shall dine-on
Omelets are fine too
Obesity I shun
Occasion coming up
Orange chiffon dress and
Opal earrings I'd wear
Outlook for a new beau


4/6/2021

Poetry Contest: Pleiades O 
Sponsored by: Kim Merryman

A Pleiades is a 7 line poem with each line containing 6 syllables. 
It has a one word title and for this contest must start with letter O.  
Each line must start with an O also.
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Kendrick Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 2:25 PM
Reads like you live a healthy life in this winning work. Way to go. Congrats. Sara
Callus Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 1:30 AM
Back with congratulations, Eve!! Well done, my friend. Hugs // paul
Poet Avatar
April 8, 2021 at 3:16 PM
Congratulations on your win Eve, it was just superb.
Canerdy Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 10:03 PM
CONGRATS on your win, Eve. Janice
Y. Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 9:15 PM
Hi Eve, Good use of the O’s .I really enjoyed the read. Congratulations on your win. Have a wonderful evening:-) Alexis
May Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 5:48 PM
Wonderful write Eve, Congrats on your win..
Dietrich Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 3:11 PM
I thought this one was such a fun read. Back with my congrats, Eve.
Merryman Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 2:16 PM
Eve, congrats on your win in my contest with your stylish pleaides! Blessings, Kim M
DiMino Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 9:58 AM
Ouch! Those added pounds. They seem to defy even the best poets and their poetry as we age. A new, truly loving beau, will not care...maybe:) Love this little gem of yours. Delightful! Congratulations!!
Burch Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 7:14 AM
Congratulations!!! Eve! Well done! Big huggs and thanks for your visit. Deb
Pandit Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 4:59 AM
Congrats on you win, Eve. So well done.
Ibeh Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 4:50 AM
Fantastically done pleiades, Eve:-) Congratulations on your win!
Seeker Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 3:22 AM
entertaining one! Congrats on your win, Eve!
Buhagiar Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 12:32 AM
Congratulations on your placement. My contest days are unfortunately over for now.
Kerr Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 11:46 PM
Thanks Eve for your generous comment on my selection. Congratulations to you as well on this extremely clever and creative work. Well done Howard
Wolf Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 5:48 PM
Oatmeal and Omelets -- count me in too... though I'm not sure about that obesity part. lol. Nice one, Eve. G.L. in the contest, gw
Dietrich Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 4:46 PM
I really like this one, and you even had an omelet in there. That was what I wrote my whole thing on. Really cute one.
Callus Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 2:15 PM
Outshining all the other girls, Eve! Looking good :) GL in the contest. Hugs // paul
One Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 1:30 PM
Oh love this one..You did it so well..
Mcintosh Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 2:13 AM
Lovely O's... God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
Krutsinger Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 10:54 PM
The O'S are in high gear here, Eve. Well done!
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