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I write because I can
and sentence structure doen't interest me
or what verb goes where
or when it all makes sense,
for I'm waiting for a moment
when some entity intervenes and 
seems
to 
write to rhyme
or,
time stops and a new idea
reaches within
to spin
me in a different direction than 
when I entered here.
Exactly where am I, anyway?

On this machine they call it ....
cyberspace.
"They" (whoever "   " are) have to label
every place and every time and
every other thing like rocks and trees
and a breeze 
that breathes and does the universe know
that it can blow?

From the legal tablet lined in yellow
its a different space and place where
slowly the eraser seems
to work its magic or its tragic
when it wipes away 
the best idea of the whole damn day ....

While I am here, Exactly where are You?
 Reading me or is it only another name,
another body, another face, another place and
we are all the same
busily tapping on something
called
keys .....
as We write because We can.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/13/2008 5:25:00 PM
Amen! Wow! Such a profound piece on writing--such a honest reflection. I'm glad you're back at The Soup even though you haven't posted anything new. You are a very talented writer and will find your muse. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen
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Date: 6/10/2008 1:34:00 PM
I right bcuz I kan 2.Freakin' phonics has me messed up. You write because we enjoy your stuff. God Bless. Vince
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