Ophidiphobic Oh Ohpower

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Miss Milai murmurs many times to me Ssshhhh! Snake slithers surreptitiously Between benches beside your bicycle My craziest carelessness: catastrophic cry Carrying my carriage, ‘then I cuddle ©2015Leonora Galinta All Rights Reserved Nov. 15, 2015 1.23am

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/7/2015 6:27:00 PM

Yikes, I hate the picture above LOL, I hate snakes. SIS, I fear snakes. Thank you for sharing your crazy and I have to say frightening moment. I would have fainted. Sending hugs and love. forever & ever. Your BFF LINDA

Len Gasun
Date: 12/15/2015 8:18:00 AM

Hello my dearest sis-BFF! :))))Thank you so much once again. I'm dropping by for a while to post my poem for your car contest then go and eat my dinner then be back again later or tomorrow to visit you and everyone here. Yeah, snakes are so scary my dearest sis! Please don't faint. Hold my hand and we'll run away from the snake together :)). Thank you, thank you so much for stopping by. Sending hugs and love back to you my forever & ever sis.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 11/15/2015 5:22:00 AM

amiga Leony, cute and hilarious! hugs!~Olive Eloisa =`)

Len Gasun
Date: 11/17/2015 8:34:00 AM

:))) Thank you so much for passing by my dear friend, Olive. Hugs back at you!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/15/2015 12:01:00 AM

Your note was so funny Leonora. I do understand your fear though. I am not afraid of snakes, but I am afraid of spiders. I act like a complete fool around them if I think they are coming at me. I enjoyed your poem and your cute story that inspired it! Hugs, Connie

Len Gasun
Date: 11/15/2015 1:18:00 AM

:))Thank you so much my very dear poet friend Connie for enjoying my poem/story and especially for sharing some of your precious time to visit my poetry. I appreciate so much and for understanding my Ophidiphobia. I'm not so much afraid of spiders 'coz my younger brother and I used to play with it when we're young. I was bitten by green one and it was so painful but I was fine. :)) More blessings to you dearest friend. TYTYSM!Have a blessed wkend! Hugs!

Skat A

Date: 11/14/2015 9:50:00 PM

Ha Leonora, Love that you did alliteration poem. One of my favorite forms. LOL, about the anaconda. I hate snakes, they make my skin crawl, everything about them. Leonora a fine write. (glad it was not poisonous) Love SKAT

Len Gasun
Date: 11/14/2015 11:30:00 PM

Hello my dearest sis-friend, Skat! It's so nice to read your comment as I got back home from an eatery nearby. Whew! Thanks God, there was no snake when my friends and I arrived but this time ,got wet by the rain:) It rained instantly during sunshine while we're cycling to the nearby eatery from church. Resting awhile (before taking shower ) while reading your lovely comments and enjoying your lovely visit. My dearest friend-sis, I really hate snake too, the reason why I didn't order yet my fave thai noodles at the eatery a while ago:))) Again, thank you, thank you sooo much. A blessed weekend. Many hugs to you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/14/2015 1:27:00 PM

- I had really been terrified !!!!! - Fortunately, we have not snakes here I live - I wish you a wonderful weekend, dear friend Leonora - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun
Date: 11/14/2015 7:50:00 PM

Hello my very dear friend, Anne Lise! I was really terrified as well. Here, there are really many trees and plants. So, snakes and many other animals dwell especially birds. They're tame especially the birds. When I told my other thai friends about that huge green snake, they said green ones are not dangerous. So, I just shrugged off my shoulder. But I'm so so scared of snake no matter what they say. I'm so glad to know that there are no snakes in your place. I wish you a wonderful weekend too my dear friend .Thank you, thank you so much for your precious time stopping by. Have a wonderful weekend too! Manhy hugs to you from me!