Opened Heart

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FROM MY ROOF GARDEN. PICTURE TAKEN BY ME. (c)

She opened her heart He rushed in with a broad smile Happiness followed! (c) Demetrios Trifiatis 02 July 2016 5-7-5

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Date: 7/2/2016 7:53:00 PM

Smiles are wonderful gestures... They go along way... Lovely Haiku...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/3/2016 8:11:00 AM

Thank you dear, Bonnie for your visit and your lovely smile!

Date: 7/2/2016 3:26:00 PM

Hi Demetrios, There's so much love in these three lines. It's so romantic! Beautiful photo too:-)Alexis

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/3/2016 8:14:00 AM

How wonderful to see you again my dearest, Alexis. Thank you so much for your visit and comment!

Date: 7/2/2016 7:40:00 AM

.... Oh....my golden rose ... can you see how it shines - BEAUTIFUL !!!! (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/2/2016 8:28:00 AM

Oh, Yes, it is your golden rose dear, Anne-Lise! I thought it fits for this poem! Thank you my friend for your visit and comment! Hugs