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Open Your Front Door

The birds are singing Outside my door Singing to the trees That these birds sit upon The wind carries their singing Along the creek below Their song travels to the fish Who swim in the creek below The fish carry these sounds Out to the ocean floor The music travels to the sails Of the ships along this shore The wind again will blow To each beach on the edge To the edge of the oceans door So every soul will hear These songs my birds are singing Outside my front door If you do not hear these birds singing Open your front door

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/29/2018 12:36:00 PM
WoW ! Bobby, I really enjoyed it from start to finish. I found it to be so poetic. Great imagery and content as well. I got so caught up in this write that I could "hear" the birds singing. And they sounded lovely. Well done BF:-)Alexis
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Bobby May
Date: 12/29/2018 1:28:00 PM
WOW! thank you Alexis you are to kind, Happy New Year my friend
Date: 12/29/2018 7:05:00 AM
Bobby, this is great.. Probably one of your best poems... Those birds sining so early in the morning can be a bit annoyting though lol..
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Bobby May
Date: 12/29/2018 7:25:00 AM
I know huh those darn birds my problem is I have woodpeckers they can keep that sound, Thank You Silent, Happy New Year my friend!

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