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Open your eyes If I were there I would caress your heart with the thread of a silken cocoon Stitched now as one on the eve of the weary, bound by the light of the moon Careful to touch oh so soft as a feather, gentle as butterfly tears Keeping you close on the edge of the tomorrow, shielding your soul from the fears Dew drop beliefs on the lawn they are waiting, prisms of lighthearted scenes Dandelion clouds offer sweet pea protection, dragonflies float in between Watching as breezes of painted day whispers on kite strings of warm summer fire Sing with the echoes, repeating their sonnet, offering all you desire Though all I have is a poet’s conviction, spilled now in ink penned to share Hoping on dreams you will rest in the sunrise, find a few moments to spare Taking the hand of this forgotten hero, trusting in him ever true Open your eyes for a new day is dawning, written with love just for you Good morning Soupers

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Date: 2/3/2017 7:47:00 PM
Great write. I love the flow, rhyme and meter. It reads like a song. Congratulations.
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Date: 2/3/2017 3:28:00 PM
Beautiful!
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Chris Green
Date: 2/3/2017 4:00:00 PM
Thanks so very much Judy
Date: 1/30/2017 5:04:00 PM
Wow Chris! What a scene...and how sweet the sentiment. Just amazing. Carole
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Chris Green
Date: 1/30/2017 5:11:00 PM
Thank you so very much Carole for your kind thoughts today. I am happy you enjoyed this one.
Date: 1/29/2017 11:31:00 AM
- Always a pleasure to read your poems, Chris - Congrats on your p.o.t.w. !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Chris Green
Date: 1/30/2017 8:57:00 AM
Thanks so very much Anne-Lise. I had no idea this was chosen for POTW. That is exciting.
Date: 1/29/2017 10:10:00 AM
Oh, you old romantic, you! I do hope your lady(ies) save books of hard copies.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/30/2017 8:56:00 AM
Ha, that's funny. I'm sure some read them and think, oh, it's just him again. :) Thanks so much my friend.
Date: 1/24/2017 10:26:00 PM
Well Chris, it is almost midnight as i read this and it certainly hasn't faded with the sunlight....nicely done.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/25/2017 9:37:00 AM
Thank you so much John. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one
Date: 1/24/2017 9:34:00 AM
A hero should never be forgotten but eternally remembered..And such beautiful words will warm the hearts forever.Good Morning Mr.Green.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/24/2017 10:05:00 AM
Good morning Ms. Chircop. :) Thanks so very much Charmaine for always making my morning bright with your kindness.
Date: 1/24/2017 7:48:00 AM
Good morning Chris, I look forward to reading you each morning. Because I know I will see a beautiful sight unfold before my eyes. I was right you painted a lovely scene my friend. A without a doubt seven and a fav:-)
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Chris Green
Date: 1/24/2017 10:04:00 AM
Good morning Alexis. I am happy I could create a scene this morning that brought a smile to you. I appreciate you so much.
Date: 1/24/2017 7:19:00 AM
"Forgotten hero"??? Who said? You are the hero of PS:) this is a beauty, Chris, adding it to my faves:)
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Chris Green
Date: 1/24/2017 10:03:00 AM
Thank you Jo, that is such a nice thing to say to me. I appreciate your kindness my friend.
Date: 1/24/2017 7:13:00 AM
This reads so smoothly, comforting and written with perfection. A favorite, Chris. :)
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Chris Green
Date: 1/24/2017 9:58:00 AM
Thank you Heidi for always bring me a smile to start my day. :)
Date: 1/24/2017 6:54:00 AM
Morning Chris, almost dactylic meter, love that... 4x in one line, 3 in the next. And then I haven't even said anything about the lovely content yet. Love this :)
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Darren White
Date: 1/24/2017 10:15:00 AM
That's the fun of it. Exactly how it works! Splitting poems in dactyls, anapests and the like is what I do for a living :)
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Chris Green
Date: 1/24/2017 9:57:00 AM
Good morning Darren. Thanks for coming by today and leaving such kind words for me. I'm not too sure about all of that dactylic and iambic meter stuff, I just get a melody in my head and write to it. :)
Date: 1/24/2017 6:18:00 AM
A very classy piece of poetry there, Chris! By the way, how is your Takemine treating you? Or should I say your office guitar! Ha. Love it /|\
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Chris Green
Date: 1/24/2017 9:56:00 AM
It's sitting right here behind me staring at me. :) I guess I should pick it up once in a while. Thanks so much my friend.

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