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Open Your Eyes

If you would open your heart you could plainly see, I love you and we're meant to be. Open your eyes my darling, because I have already fallen. When we open our eyes, I hope our love never dies. When the day comes to say the " I do" I hope we can see the beauty in in too. I've been in love with you for a little while now, come to me with open arms and with a smile.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/3/2016 12:28:00 AM
Very romantic, Amanda.
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Date: 1/21/2016 11:19:00 PM
will you accept my heart from the start and never part even in times tart, that decision's smart because together we make the purest art....very Beautiful Amanda....;)
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Amanda Teague
Date: 1/22/2016 11:23:00 AM
Thank you so much that means a lot to me.
Date: 1/21/2016 12:55:00 PM
sincere and pleading.... You hit a good tone..... Although wondering if 'were' should have be "we're"
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Amanda Teague
Date: 1/21/2016 2:15:00 PM
Thank you for your comment I have fixed it

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