Open Your Eyes

If you would open your heart you could 
 plainly see, I love you and we're meant to be.
    Open your eyes my darling,
 because I have already fallen.
    When we open our eyes, I
 hope our love never dies.
    When the day comes to say the " I do"
 I hope we can see the beauty in in too.
   I've been in love with you for a little while now,
 come to me with open arms and with a smile.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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George   Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 12:28 AM
Very romantic, Amanda.
Boddie Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 11:19 PM
will you accept my heart from the start and never part even in times tart, that decision's smart because together we make the purest art....very Beautiful Amanda....;)
Teague Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 11:23 AM
Thank you so much that means a lot to me.
Aniagyei Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 12:55 PM
sincere and pleading.... You hit a good tone..... Although wondering if 'were' should have be "we're"
Teague Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 2:15 PM
Thank you for your comment I have fixed it
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