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Open your eyes to the detailed view Now is your gifted chance day or night To see the beauty like drops of dew Valuable breaks to help you get through Any unexpected stressful plight Open your eyes to the detailed view Positive thoughts from scenes that are new A moment, a breath, a gift from sight To see the beauty like drops of dew Colorful birds that fly around you The stars that are sparkling in the night Open your eyes to the detailed view Moments of silence show what is true It's your choice, your life, to take the flight To see the beauty like drops of dew Calmness will come from places you flew Flowers dance when you know what is right Open your eyes to the detailed view To see the beauty like drops of dew Heidi Sands 6/17/24 9 Syllables (C)opyright

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Date: 6/21/2024 6:07:00 AM
Long live beautiful views..We can look into Heidi.' This is encouraging me to write on a Different type of appreciation in humanitys Resiliance and Gods forberance and blessings Availible if applied for and requested.' Hope You are feeling good.'
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/21/2024 7:31:00 AM
That is nice to hear today. Thank you for your kind feedback. I am ok. Thanks. :)
Date: 6/17/2024 8:03:00 PM
Love the rhyme scheme and the visual delights, Heidi. Beautiful villanelle! :) Gershon
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/17/2024 8:40:00 PM
I am happy you love this Gershon. Thank you. I am grateful for your kind comments ! :) Have a good night. The celtics won the championship. Yay !
Date: 6/17/2024 4:36:00 PM
I see much beauty in your poem dear Heidi, what a joy it was to read it, hope all is well :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/17/2024 8:46:00 PM
Thank you. I am happy you find joy in this and I appreciate your comment very much :)

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