OPEN VERSE 9-10
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THESE ARE OPEN(organic) VERSES using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretation unique to the moment
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SENSES
exemplary
anecdotes
in
memorabilia
particularly
impressive
&
prominent
symbolized
by
the
immovable
in
selfless
love
explicit
with
ambivalence
&
devotion
a
recast
narrative
highlighted
in
flux
a
listening
dilemma
TENSIONS
so
destructive
can enthrall
&
fufill
become
lyrical
spaces
mysterious
&
magnificent
reflected
symbols
in a
scattered
awareness
oblique
&
unusual
optically
true
pictorially
simple
contours
isolated
&
an
emotional
gathering
in
a
spiritual
panorama
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