OPEN VERSE 9-10

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THESE ARE OPEN(organic) VERSES using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretation unique to the moment

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SENSES
exemplary
  anecdotes
in
memorabilia
 particularly
  impressive
&
 prominent
symbolized
  by
the
 immovable
in
selfless
  love
explicit
with
  ambivalence
&
devotion
a
recast
narrative
highlighted
in
  flux
a
listening
  dilemma
TENSIONS
so
 destructive
can enthrall
&
fufill
become
 lyrical
spaces
mysterious
&
  magnificent
reflected
 symbols
in a
scattered
awareness
 oblique
&
unusual
optically
 true
pictorially
simple
contours
 isolated
&
an
emotional
  gathering
in
  a
    spiritual
panorama

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