OPEN VERSE 7-8

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THESE ARE OPEN(organic) VERSES using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretation unique to the moment

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INTERIORS
signs
of consideration
at
first glance
divide
the darkness
a
mutual
   exclusion
foreboding& inaccessible
conceived
reminiscent
  of the forlorn
pallid
  desolate
heightened
in
prevailing
  melancholy
shadowed
in
   emptiness
articulated
& anticipated

in
the
unusual&untamed
with
  brooding
 exemplified
by
separation
SYNTHESIS
alienation
 unregistered
induces
scrutinywith
interior
 &
comparable
transformation
a
visible
conscious
  perception
of
the
  intimate
fields
of sensation
in the
  problematic

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