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Open the floodgates dear, of body, mind and soul, that heart be love aligned, to feel blissful and whole, erasing each dark fear. Open the floodgates dear, by childlike surrender, that The Holy Spirit love and light does render, as tidings of good cheer. Open the floodgates dear, arms open in embrace, oozing with compassion, inviting divine grace, to make our life course clear. Open the floodgates dear, abiding in stillness, melding with the vast void, entwined with That oneness, till we see God appear. 27-April-2022

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Date: 5/30/2022 8:16:00 AM
Open the floodgates to see God appear. Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/30/2022 8:35:00 AM
Thank you, Chris
Date: 5/29/2022 5:26:00 PM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this uplifting, sublime piece, Seeker:-) Your poem has a wonderful flow to it as well!
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Date: 5/29/2022 7:41:00 PM
Thank you, Edward. To be honest, what started of as an intent to pen a Monchielle, finally emerged as a tweaked enclosed rhyme of sorts. I enjoyed participating in your contest, thanks for hosting.
Date: 4/27/2022 4:53:00 PM
Nicely penned, US, an uplifting rendition my friend, Aloha~William
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Date: 4/27/2022 6:22:00 PM
Thank you, William!
Date: 4/27/2022 8:07:00 AM
A very inspiring poem.
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Date: 4/27/2022 6:22:00 PM
So happy you enjoyed, Victor

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