Open Spaces of My Mind

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beyond commotion the concealed watertight door hides a world onto my own an inner realm painstakingly mastered the delicate balance of covert turbulence and serenity AP: 3rd place 2020 Submitted on April 12, 2020 for contest STRAND PICK 11 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/14/2020 1:47:00 PM

Inner worlds, sanctums of conflicting emotions, delicately balanced. Well-penned, my friend! :) gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/14/2020 8:28:00 PM

Thanks, Gershon. Much appreciated.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/13/2020 10:14:00 PM

A great win. Your picture shows the crazy world of today. Enjoyed your write. Have a wonderful week..........

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/14/2020 12:25:00 AM

Thank you so much, Paula. Much appreciated.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 4/13/2020 7:47:00 AM

The inner world swaying between turmoil and serenity.. always seeking contentment and tranquility.. A wonderful rendition of the voice of the innermost thoughts in a poetic flair! A great pleasure to read your poetry, dear Line. Peace and happiness to your soul. Best regards. Love and hugs.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/13/2020 10:20:00 AM

Thank you so much, Besma. Most appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/12/2020 9:46:00 PM

You can never go wrong with the "inner realm" Line. So beautiful!

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/13/2020 10:20:00 AM

Thanks, Caren. Much appreciated.

Winged Warrior

Date: 4/12/2020 9:05:00 PM

Love the verse & the pic, Line...stay safe and Happy Easter my friend...the Wingster :o)

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/12/2020 9:37:00 PM

Thanks, WW. Most appreciated.