Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

Notes About The Poem

Open Spaces of My Mind

beyond
commotion
the concealed
watertight door
hides a world
onto my own
an inner realm
painstakingly
mastered

the delicate
balance
of
covert
turbulence
and
serenity



AP: 3rd place 2020

Submitted on April 12, 2020 for contest STRAND PICK 11 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST

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Gershon Wolf April 14, 2020 at 1:47 PM Inner worlds, sanctums of conflicting emotions, delicately balanced. Well-penned, my friend! :) gw Line Gauthier April 14, 2020 at 8:28 PM Thanks, Gershon. Much appreciated.

Paula Goldsmith April 13, 2020 at 10:14 PM A great win. Your picture shows the crazy world of today. Enjoyed your write. Have a wonderful week.......... Line Gauthier April 14, 2020 at 12:25 AM Thank you so much, Paula. Much appreciated.

Besma Riabi Dziri April 13, 2020 at 7:47 AM The inner world swaying between turmoil and serenity.. always seeking contentment and tranquility.. A wonderful rendition of the voice of the innermost thoughts in a poetic flair! A great pleasure to read your poetry, dear Line. Peace and happiness to your soul. Best regards. Love and hugs. Line Gauthier April 13, 2020 at 10:20 AM Thank you so much, Besma. Most appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger April 12, 2020 at 9:46 PM You can never go wrong with the "inner realm" Line. So beautiful! Line Gauthier April 13, 2020 at 10:20 AM Thanks, Caren. Much appreciated.

Winged Warrior April 12, 2020 at 9:05 PM Love the verse & the pic, Line...stay safe and Happy Easter my friend...the Wingster :o) Line Gauthier April 12, 2020 at 9:37 PM Thanks, WW. Most appreciated.