Open Space

Efflorescence in a period of time
As Chicory plant spreads
While arboretum is filled with newly watered seeds
The wild-flower in all its glory blooms

The gentility of the open space soiled
Polluted by the lack of responsibilities
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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June 7, 2019 at 11:39 AM
I love this. I always fall into the trap of needing full sentences, but you do a great job playing with syntax to write a poem that flows and doesn't stop.
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