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Open Space

Efflorescence in a period of time As Chicory plant spreads While arboretum is filled with newly watered seeds The wild-flower in all its glory blooms The gentility of the open space soiled Polluted by the lack of responsibilities

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 6/7/2019 11:39:00 AM
I love this. I always fall into the trap of needing full sentences, but you do a great job playing with syntax to write a poem that flows and doesn't stop.
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