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magnetic dew bliss renews heat what’s new we’re asked 12-February-2022

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Date: 2/12/2022 8:02:00 PM
I like the non-sequitur in the third line, Seeker. Magnetic! ~ Gershon
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Date: 2/12/2022 8:58:00 PM
‘Magnetic’ alludes to the bliss current within, emanating when polarities celebrate divine union in our heart centre
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Date: 2/12/2022 8:21:00 PM
Thanks gw, a haiku type twist, non-sequitur, as you say, non-sequtur, non-sequitur … new word, your vocabulary is amazing!