Open Renga Session

Through the cold ether
we can talk, who has never
once seen each other

( Gregory R Barden)
Weaving words like lace, 
we trim the hem of language ... 
made kin by our craft

(MAHTAB BANGALEE)
For ether we are live in one roof
beautiful
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Agustin Avatar
June 12, 2026 at 2:50 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Arnold Avatar
December 13, 2018 at 6:24 AM
This touched me. Thanks for sharing.
Bangalee Avatar
December 11, 2018 at 10:06 PM
For ether we are live in one roof /// beautiful
Barden Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 4:27 AM
Weaving words like lace, we trim the hem of language ... made kin by our craft
Arnold Avatar
December 13, 2018 at 6:25 AM
I love these words and how easy they flow. I'm new here so I'll try to get some written and read more. Having trouble uploading my profile pic.
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