Terry Miller Poet Triolet

Open Door

Glow from slight open door shining my way
casting a long shadow of me behind.
I stand alone and think awhile, midway;
glow from slight open door shining my way.
Portal crossed, shadows fall the other way,
as does the light. The choice is ill-defined.
Glow from slight open door shining my way,
casting a long shadow of me behind.

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Michelle Smith January 7, 2023 at 12:14 PM Interesting! :O Terry Miller January 20, 2023 at 6:14 AM Thank you, Michelle

Linda Alice Fowler January 2, 2023 at 8:24 AM Beautifully intriguing Terry. Best wishes for the contest! :) Terry Miller January 6, 2023 at 7:14 AM Thank you, Linda for your visit and kind comments

Gershon Wolf December 31, 2022 at 9:06 PM Love the mystery in this triolet, Terry! Bravo. Happy 2023 to you. :) Gershon Terry Miller January 6, 2023 at 7:14 AM Thanks, Gershon; Happy 2023 to you also!

Speaks Volumes December 27, 2022 at 11:05 AM Terry you are amazing! I tried and tried and gave up. I just couldn't get my head around a triolet. Yours flows so well and makes sense! Well done. Terry Miller January 6, 2023 at 7:15 AM Hi Wendy, thank you for your kind comments, I have just read yours, and I am so glad you stuck with it. It was worth it!

Andrea Dietrich December 27, 2022 at 10:01 AM Very interesting take on the theme. She is getting lots of great entries like yours. Terry Miller January 6, 2023 at 7:16 AM Thank you, Andrea, I struggled with the triolet.

Joe Maverick December 27, 2022 at 7:18 AM A far reaching, and shadowy piece Terry, Could almost have espionage properties Leanings..Er origins; hmm direction, yes ' Well done with the light silhouette effect Also best for the contest.' Terry Miller January 6, 2023 at 7:16 AM Thank you, Joe!