Open Bright Eyes

Vast nothingness
Open pages
Connected stars
Bright eyes

A tingling touch
A riveting feeling
Manifest my destiny

Close my eyes
Feel my soul
Feed my spirit

Open your lips, your hands, your heart
And create beauty

The clouds
They move slowly above your head
But don't miss their movement

(This poem was written in about 2 minutes. I sat down and wrote the first words that
popped into my head.)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 6/1/2010 2:45:00 PM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 9/12/2009 12:01:00 PM
Ashley, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul
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Date: 9/12/2009 6:44:00 AM
I love the 'Open your lips, your hands, your heart and create beauty. SO POWERFUL. Congratulations on your well deserved win in Matt's contest, Ashley. Love, Lainie
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Date: 9/12/2009 5:15:00 AM
Congratulations Ashley, You did it well! Your “Write Now” poem is among the winners. You did at great job letting your thoughts flow. Keep up the good writing. SMILES… Dane Ann
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Date: 9/11/2009 1:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Matt's contest Ashley.Love, Carol
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Date: 9/11/2009 12:39:00 PM
Congratulations, Ashley. Isn't it amazing what words can just pop into one's head...yours fell right into place!!
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Date: 9/2/2009 12:51:00 PM
Beautiful with fantastic imagination. Vivid imagery.
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Date: 8/29/2009 7:36:00 AM
Good writing, keep sharing, and welcome to the soup.
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Date: 8/29/2009 6:14:00 AM
Ashley, Welcome to Poetrysoup. I enjoyed reading your poem today. It is wonderfully spontaneous. You should enter it into the "Write Now" contest. Just click on Member Contests and scroll down to it. Keep writing. Sincerely, DAS-J"
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Date: 8/28/2009 4:06:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your splendid poetry today Ahley. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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