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If everyone lives in a fantasy world then what, actually, is reality? There's too many people on this ill-fated earth afraid to embrace their own unique mentality. But these people, these people, need to grow and become one within themselves Or they'll all just rot here, on this earth like old fruit, left up on the shelves. You gotta laugh at life see it through a child's eyes. Cause if you don't, man, I feel sorry Your the victim of your own demise.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/15/2011 6:20:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Jay. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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