Opaque Tears

Staring in from the outside
I was always looking through opaque windows
At posers and name droppers
I thought perhaps that they were superficial
A façade of face
With no substance 
But I found them everywhere
How could such a conspiracy go unnoticed?
Was I the only one on the outside?
Surely there were other losers like me
Lonely, unsure, yet with common sense
I know that there is not always safety in numbers
Sometime you have to be alone and become one 
With yourself
Ego 
Perhaps
Self-preservation you bet
Yes I am an island
And yes Hemingway was wrong
I think a man can and must become and island to himself
There is but one truth in this world and it is that we all must die
Do we go to heaven?  Do we go hell?
Are we reincarnated?  Do we live the same life over and over?
I don’t know any of the answers to these questions: however,
I do know that I would rather be alone
Than with a crowd of people.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/9/2014 10:32:00 PM
Amazing poem, Stephen.. thanks for sharing.. Always, Laura
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 3/20/2014 9:53:00 PM
As always thanks Laura. ~Kilmer
Date: 3/9/2014 2:10:00 PM
I really --really truly loved this piece... why... because you wrote it about me. :) No seriously , I hold these exact beliefs. My mantra song.. "I am a rock.. I am an Island" Simon and Garfunkel. Excellent poem Xx~Xx
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Date: 3/20/2014 9:53:00 PM
Kim, Well of course I did! :) Glad you enjoyed it. Islands are good things. ~Kilmer
Date: 3/8/2014 9:45:00 PM
want
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Date: 3/8/2014 10:39:00 PM
sometime it's hard to break free of the chains of other people. But you can do it. love ~Kilmer
Date: 3/8/2014 9:44:00 PM
Im crying...you know me.. I just ant to be alone. BG
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