Opaque Soul Made Whole

A bullet speaks loud in fleeting breath
Fires rage while weaving death
The wind cries out in a desperate wail
A burdened mind dreams to no avail

Anger smolders waiting to rise
A tempest brewing in disguise
But a smile from you is bright
Thawing hearts and restoring light
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Jones Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 12:33 AM
Such a great title with a greater ending! Love the rhyme too!
Delegans Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 10:32 PM
Thanks, Karen!
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