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Misty mornings across the ridges Dense rain in the silent darkness Cloudy days filled with sweet riches Thick moments alive in starkness ~ Smoky gray tenderness in the dawn Thick melancholy fills the mystery Impenetrable feelings to which I’m drawn Unclear focus of the dreamy history ~ Muddy colors flow through the hours Solid impressions of glory and power Obscure details discovered in showers Opaque joys that we will all devour November 20, 2019 Opaque Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Anthony Slausin

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Date: 12/2/2019 3:25:00 PM
Great imagery that so illustrates your beautiful picture. Congrats Regina!
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Date: 11/29/2019 8:24:00 PM
Nice, solid poem, congrats, Peter
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Date: 11/28/2019 11:57:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Gina
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Date: 11/28/2019 9:42:00 AM
Great imagery! Congrats, Regina!
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Date: 11/20/2019 4:18:00 PM
Great piece Gina, brilliantly penned with great imagery too. Blessings and prayers,Gordon
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Date: 11/20/2019 4:06:00 PM
Great!
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Date: 11/20/2019 8:01:00 AM
Beautifully done Gina. I loved this. Best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 11/20/2019 3:36:00 AM
This is lovely. Ann
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