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Opaque Joys

Misty mornings across the ridges Dense rain in the silent darkness Cloudy days filled with sweet riches Thick moments alive in starkness ~ Smoky gray tenderness in the dawn Thick melancholy fills the mystery Impenetrable feelings to which I’m drawn Unclear focus of the dreamy history ~ Muddy colors flow through the hours Solid impressions of glory and power Obscure details discovered in showers Opaque joys that we will all devour November 20, 2019 Opaque Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Anthony Slausin
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Kauffman Avatar
December 2, 2019 at 3:25 PM
Great imagery that so illustrates your beautiful picture. Congrats Regina!
Iversen  Avatar
November 29, 2019 at 8:24 PM
Nice, solid poem, congrats, Peter
Na Avatar
November 28, 2019 at 11:57 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Gina
Ligon Avatar
November 28, 2019 at 9:42 AM
Great imagery! Congrats, Regina!
Mcconnell Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 4:18 PM
Great piece Gina, brilliantly penned with great imagery too. Blessings and prayers,Gordon
Mcguire Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 4:06 PM
Great!
Green Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 8:01 AM
Beautifully done Gina. I loved this. Best wishes in the contest.
Foster Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 3:36 AM
This is lovely. Ann
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