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Opaque Dreams

O beautiful night your black wings extinguish the light cloak me in darkness paint my face in shade for I am a shadow to life existing on ash and soot I am sustained in a void covered in mother earth my mask of horror is hidden, but a full moon unveils my face and the pall of depression bows the ebony trail I shred withdraws from inner light, I shall subsist in shadows until silence rules no more

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/8/2013 2:25:00 PM
Every line is exquisitely done with great images and the last one just blew me away - Tim
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Date: 5/15/2013 7:16:00 PM
Love your opaque dreams. Lots of great images. SuZ
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Date: 4/19/2013 6:09:00 AM
- A deep and very well written poem, Jayne! - Wishing you a great weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Jayne Eggins
Date: 4/19/2013 7:01:00 AM
Very happy you enjoyed the read take care love JC x

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