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Opals

Opalescent leaves fall
outside summer's green door.
Outbound, a year sparkles
once age has come with grace.
Orange sun, red roses
of a starry evening.
Old age looks back, dreaming.

Copyright © Evelyn Judy Buehler | Year Posted 2024

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Sara Kendrick Date: 11/9/2024 4:46:00 AM Congrats on your winner. Sara K Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 11/9/2024 9:38:00 PM Deepest thanks, Sara.

Sam Kauffman Date: 11/4/2024 10:43:00 AM Judy, congratulations on your win with this elegant rainbow of floral opals and the sense of memories. So pretty with wonderful depth of meaning. You paint scenes in hues of words. So happy for your win. Bunches of harvest blessings to you! Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 11/9/2024 9:37:00 PM Sam, your lovely words of appreciation uplift and delight me! Thank you so much. Loads of harvest blessings to you also, ny friend.

Paula Goldsmith Date: 11/3/2024 10:19:00 AM Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your pretty write for the pretty "Opals" again. Have a blessed day writing away............. Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 11/3/2024 12:05:00 PM Thank you so much for your lovely words of congratulations and esteem. I hope your day is wonderful, too. :)

Kim Rodrigues Date: 11/2/2024 8:06:00 PM Your use of colors always stunning! Congrats, Evelyn! Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 11/3/2024 11:57:00 AM Thank you for the thrilling compliment and congratulations, Kim. :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/2/2024 4:44:00 PM Outstanding metaphor here, Evelyn. So clever of you painting such a pretty fall picture. Congrats also I adored the final line . Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 11/2/2024 6:46:00 PM You have my deepest thanks for your kind words, Andrea. I enjoyed the contest so much. :)

Paula Goldsmith Date: 10/24/2024 9:29:00 AM A pretty write for the pretty "Opals." I love the stone/colors... Blessings as you write away................ Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 10/24/2024 5:37:00 PM Deepest thanks, my friend. I am elated by your words. :)

Sara Kendrick Date: 10/23/2024 5:03:00 AM Wonderful comparison of aging to the seasons. Very creative. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 10/23/2024 4:47:00 PM Thank you for the lovely thoughts and vote of confidence, Sara. Best wishes. :)

Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/20/2024 2:31:00 PM Sparkling with colors though heading for old age. Enjoyed! Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 10/20/2024 3:30:00 PM Thank you so much for the smiles. :)

Hilda Greenhough Date: 10/18/2024 4:43:00 PM I enjoy your poem. Age and the season Fall seem to coincide. I like the autumn colors that you included. Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 10/18/2024 7:39:00 PM I appreciate your kind toughts so much, Hilda. :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/18/2024 2:26:00 AM - Lovely poem, Evelyn :) - hugs Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 10/18/2024 7:37:00 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise. hugs :-)

Victor Buhagiar Date: 10/17/2024 1:30:00 AM I loved the rhythm of your Pleiades. You use color brilliantly. Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 10/17/2024 5:06:00 PM Thank you for your gladdening remarks, and for the smiles they bring. :)

Ink Empress Date: 10/16/2024 11:21:00 PM Dear evelyn, ah im sure andrea would love this, and I absolutely love how you’ve written yours, especially with lines such as “ Orange sun, red roses of a starry evening.” how beautiful!! What a stunning evening! “ Old age looks back, dreaming.“ i can feel the reminiscing there too! Very well written a fave this is for me! Best wishes: sending you light always Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 10/17/2024 5:03:00 PM I am so delighted by your warm remarks and your joy inducing fave, dear Ink. Reading your lovely comments is always a wonderful experience. Thank you so much. Blessings.