Opals

O my precious jewels Opulent are my rings October birth is cool Opus of colors bring Objects of mystery Ode of poetic fuel Of truth’s intricacy

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 11/3/2024 11:46:00 AM

This is really beautiful, Kim. Congratulations on your win. Much enjoyed! :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/3/2024 4:53:00 PM

Thank you, Evelyn!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/3/2024 10:51:00 AM

Congratulations on you win. I enjoyed reading your fun/wonderful "Opals" write. A pretty fiery stone for the month of October. Happy Late Birthday Wishes... Have a blessed day writing away.............

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/3/2024 11:10:00 AM

Thank you kindly, my friend!

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 11/3/2024 8:53:00 AM

i like this one, it has a good flow, and nice ending - congrats on your contest placement!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/3/2024 11:11:00 AM

Thank you, Charlotte! I appreciate it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/2/2024 5:30:00 PM

Hey, Kim. Thanks for writing this Pleiades. I liked how you ended relating it to poetry. Congrats

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/2/2024 8:02:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/15/2024 5:41:00 AM

I have an opal ring which was passed down to me years ago as mum couldn't wear it , i just love the play of colours opals are truly spectacular:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/15/2024 6:15:00 AM

They are unique. Thank you, Jan!

Valsa George

Date: 10/14/2024 9:25:00 PM

Beautiful Pleiades. Were you born in October? A great entry, I am sure. All the best dear Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/15/2024 6:15:00 AM

Yes, I was born in October. Thank you, Valsa!

Paige Hind

Date: 10/14/2024 6:55:00 PM

Cool, my sister has an opal for her birthstone... never tried a Pleiades before, you made it seem not very difficult :) <3

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/14/2024 8:11:00 PM

I hope you try one! :)