Opals

O my precious jewels
Opulent are my rings
October birth is cool
Opus of colors bring
Objects of mystery
Ode of poetic fuel
Of truth’s intricacy

octoberpleiades

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

November 3, 2024 at 11:46 AM

This is really beautiful, Kim. Congratulations on your win. Much enjoyed! :)

Kim Rodrigues

November 3, 2024 at 4:53 PM

Thank you, Evelyn!

Paula Goldsmith

November 3, 2024 at 10:51 AM

Congratulations on you win. I enjoyed reading your fun/wonderful "Opals" write. A pretty fiery stone for the month of October. Happy Late Birthday Wishes... Have a blessed day writing away.............

Kim Rodrigues

November 3, 2024 at 11:10 AM

Thank you kindly, my friend!

Charlotte Puddifoot

November 3, 2024 at 8:53 AM

i like this one, it has a good flow, and nice ending - congrats on your contest placement!

Kim Rodrigues

November 3, 2024 at 11:11 AM

Thank you, Charlotte! I appreciate it.

Andrea Dietrich

November 2, 2024 at 5:30 PM

Hey, Kim. Thanks for writing this Pleiades. I liked how you ended relating it to poetry. Congrats

Kim Rodrigues

November 2, 2024 at 8:02 PM

Thank you, Andrea!

Jan Allison

October 15, 2024 at 5:41 AM

I have an opal ring which was passed down to me years ago as mum couldn't wear it , i just love the play of colours opals are truly spectacular:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

October 15, 2024 at 6:15 AM

They are unique. Thank you, Jan!