Opalescent

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this is the real format of my mirror acrostic.. for some reason, the main page only allows a narrow space which disaranges the lines from their proper layout..

Opening her dome like a fresco
Pixels of night gleam from atop
As stars wink, Neuth twirls the nova
Lining her cape with studs of opal
Entranced, buds glide on a lattice
Soaking in the mist of twilight’s hems
Calmly, the moon dims the magic
Embers like beams of Sky Lady invite
Nestling air for child’s bed story’s yawn
To drift upon eyes; good times,good night!

Opening
her dome like a
fresco
Pixels of
night gleam from
atop
As stars
wink, Neuth twirls
the nova
Lining her
cape with studs of
opal.
Entranced,
buds glide on a
lattice
Soaking in
the mist of
twilight’s
hems.
Calmly, the
moon dims the
magic
Embers like
beams of Sky Lady
invite 
Nestling air
for child’s bed
story’s yawn
To drift upon
eyes;  good
times,good
night!



*  for some reason,
the page only allows
a narrow space which
disarranges the
lines
 from their proper
layout...

* Neuth--Egyptian
Goddess of the Sky
 ''''''''''''''''''''''''
Judy Konos' How's
Your Acrostic

*Mirror
Acrostic:First and
last letter
of each line are the
same

8/26/2014 by nette
onclaud

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/1/2014 7:09:00 AM

brilliant!!!! quite simply I am in awe.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/28/2014 4:54:00 PM

Dropping back with my congratulations:-) hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/28/2014 11:11:00 AM

U amaze my dear friend! Great acrostic greater than I cud ever imagine ! Good luck in contest,, well u don't need this time!

Leon Enriquez

Date: 8/28/2014 9:27:00 AM

Dear Nette: Awesome acrostic! Enjoyed the browse. All the best then, Leon.

Amelie Mara

Date: 8/28/2014 5:51:00 AM

Magical! Like a slow soft dance, love your word choices, Nette! hanks for sharing this mirror-form of an acrostic.

Leon Datu

Date: 8/27/2014 6:14:00 PM

How brilliant of you to think of a mirror acrostic with a language beyond sky's limit. I can visualize the whole scene despite the layout's glitch. Brava!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/27/2014 2:05:00 PM

What a divine poetic lullaby! Exquisite dear nette!

Tanusree Ganguly

Date: 8/27/2014 1:09:00 PM

Just beautiful....so nice

Jan Allison

Date: 8/27/2014 1:06:00 PM

Stunning imagery as ever Nette:-) Good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan xx