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this is the real format of my mirror acrostic.. for some reason, the main page only allows a narrow space which disaranges the lines from their proper layout..

Opening her dome like a fresco
Pixels of night gleam from atop
As stars wink, Neuth twirls the nova
Lining her cape with studs of opal
Entranced, buds glide on a lattice
Soaking in the mist of twilight’s hems
Calmly, the moon dims the magic
Embers like beams of Sky Lady invite
Nestling air for child’s bed story’s yawn
To drift upon eyes;  good times,good night!

Opening her dome like a fresco Pixels of night gleam from atop As stars wink, Neuth twirls the nova Lining her cape with studs of opal. Entranced, buds glide on a lattice Soaking in the mist of twilight’s hems. Calmly, the moon dims the magic Embers like beams of Sky Lady invite Nestling air for child’s bed story’s yawn To drift upon eyes; good times,good night! * for some reason, the page only allows a narrow space which disarranges the lines from their proper layout... * Neuth--Egyptian Goddess of the Sky '''''''''''''''''''''''' Judy Konos' How's Your Acrostic *Mirror Acrostic:First and last letter of each line are the same 8/26/2014 by nette onclaud

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Date: 9/1/2014 7:09:00 AM
brilliant!!!! quite simply I am in awe.
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Date: 8/28/2014 4:54:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/28/2014 11:11:00 AM
U amaze my dear friend! Great acrostic greater than I cud ever imagine ! Good luck in contest,, well u don't need this time!
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Date: 8/28/2014 9:27:00 AM
Dear Nette: Awesome acrostic! Enjoyed the browse. All the best then, Leon.
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Date: 8/28/2014 5:51:00 AM
Magical! Like a slow soft dance, love your word choices, Nette! hanks for sharing this mirror-form of an acrostic.
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Date: 8/27/2014 6:14:00 PM
How brilliant of you to think of a mirror acrostic with a language beyond sky's limit. I can visualize the whole scene despite the layout's glitch. Brava!
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Date: 8/27/2014 2:05:00 PM
What a divine poetic lullaby! Exquisite dear nette!
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Date: 8/27/2014 1:09:00 PM
Just beautiful....so nice
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Date: 8/27/2014 1:06:00 PM
Stunning imagery as ever Nette:-) Good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan xx
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