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Opalescent

I close my eyes at night to reminisce Thoughts of you feel much like a warm caress And on my lips such sweet trace of a kiss Suspended stars divinely opalesce As I let out a sigh under my breath In moonlit park barely leave faint footmark The heart fears most a silence over death Connecting perchance two souls in the dark Set free over an undulating stream Whispers floating adrift a tender breeze Romantic touch lifted from lofty dream Buoyant as if launched from a love trapeze Hearts in sync blossom inseparable Beyond boundaries undeniable Submitted on February 11, 2020 for contest STRAND SELECT L sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - HONORABLE MENTION Originally posted on November 11, 2019

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Date: 11/13/2019 4:22:00 PM
Wonderfully warm and beautiful.
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Date: 11/13/2019 5:11:00 PM
Thank you so much, ML.
Date: 11/12/2019 4:49:00 PM
Your words blossom on this very page, and your sonnet takes me to a beautiful place. Wish we could all live in a sonnet such as this , oh what love we would feel. Winning wishes are being sent Line have a great evening.
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Date: 11/12/2019 6:38:00 PM
Thank you for your delightful visit and complement, Pixie.
Date: 11/12/2019 1:26:00 PM
Line, I fell in love with your sonnet :) A Fav for me. Cheers! ~Mark
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Date: 11/12/2019 4:18:00 PM
Thank you so much, Mark, for your most appreciated visit and compliment.
Date: 11/12/2019 12:19:00 PM
Love this: Romantic touch lifted from lofty dream/Buoyant as if launched from a love trapeze
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Date: 11/12/2019 2:34:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Kim.
Date: 11/12/2019 12:02:00 PM
Beautiful sonnet , good luck in the contest.
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Date: 11/12/2019 2:34:00 PM
Thank you, Eve. Much appreciated.
Date: 11/12/2019 10:12:00 AM
I'm in love, I'm in love, with your sonnet Line...best of luck my friend...a winner for me...^WW^ :o)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/12/2019 11:20:00 AM
Thank you so much, ^WW^. Most appreciated.
Date: 11/12/2019 8:00:00 AM
An enjoyable read. Blessings and good luck in the contest.
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Date: 11/12/2019 11:20:00 AM
Thanks, Richard. Much appreciated.
Date: 11/12/2019 3:43:00 AM
Beautifully done Line :) hugs
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Date: 11/12/2019 11:20:00 AM
Thanks, Sandra. Much appreciated.
Date: 11/12/2019 1:17:00 AM
Poetically beautiful; this to me sounds like "real poetry".
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/12/2019 11:19:00 AM
Thank you so much, Caren.
Date: 11/11/2019 10:51:00 PM
Lovely love! Great job Line
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/12/2019 11:18:00 AM
Thank you so much, Timothy. Much appreciated.
Date: 11/11/2019 10:05:00 PM
After reading this I want to fall in love with a Sonnet too, well done Line!!
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Date: 11/12/2019 11:18:00 AM
LOL thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Bobby.
Date: 11/11/2019 7:49:00 PM
boundaries undeniable.. sounds so romantic. Ann
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/11/2019 8:50:00 PM
Thank for your lovely visit and comment, Ann.

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