Ooze

tension out of doors stretches like a taffy-melt on a glorious summer's day

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/2/2021 1:15:00 PM

Oh, yes, I feel a relief the second I hit the air out there.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/1/2021 4:40:00 AM

Indeed a lot of tension with an unexpected ending! Great! Blows the mind! :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 2/28/2021 8:56:00 PM

I can almost see the taffy stretch in the golden sun, because the imagery is so wonderful. I loved reading it! :=)

Eve Roper

Date: 2/28/2021 8:37:00 PM

Gershon, great imagery. Thank you for your visit on my poem, “ Harbinger Birds of Spring” and leaving a wonderful compliment and congratulation. Hugs Eve