Oopsy Daisies-Photograph 1 -Under 10 Lines

This is the closest she could get
to wearing rose colored glasses
She sees nothing but innocent daisies
when a meadow of dandelions is obvious to the masses

What once was a botanical field of dreams, has changed to a field of screams
Feet planted in oblivion, she will certainly come down with a case of the crazies
She only sees the flowers she used to receive, not the weeds presented to her now
So for the time being anyhow, all she will allow herself to see, are the daisies




4/15/16

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Date: 5/17/2016 3:33:00 PM
a big belated congrats on this beauty, Dineen
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Date: 5/2/2016 10:10:00 PM
Nice job. Love the title too. Regards, Craig
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 5/3/2016 4:54:00 AM
So appreciated Craig, thank you much!
Date: 4/20/2016 11:29:00 AM
A beautiful poem on wishful thinking, Dineen. My compliments!
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 4/21/2016 4:50:00 AM
That's what I intended Ralph, thank you for such a lovely comment.
Date: 4/19/2016 11:02:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win Dineen..
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 4/21/2016 4:48:00 AM
You are quite kind Dr. Sharma, thank you very much
Date: 4/18/2016 12:25:00 PM
great interpretation of the image congrats on your win Dineen:-) hugs jan xx
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 4/21/2016 4:45:00 AM
How nice of you to say, and thank you for your congrats, Jan.
Date: 4/18/2016 11:48:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 4/21/2016 4:44:00 AM
So kind of you to say so, and thank you for the congrats, BL.
Date: 4/18/2016 9:04:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win Dineen
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 4/21/2016 4:43:00 AM
Thank you for the congrats Joseph, appreciated.
Date: 4/18/2016 1:55:00 AM
PS... I love the line you attached to the picture... the closest she could get to wearing rose colored glasses .... brilliant... LINDA
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 4/21/2016 4:42:00 AM
You humble me Linda, thank you for such a wonderful compliment.
Date: 4/18/2016 1:54:00 AM
Dineen, Congratulations on your awesome entry for my PICTURE contest. Thank you for keeping it under 10 lines... Stop by my latest blog "Photo Questions" and enjoy my take on the same picture of "Lilly Covering Her eyes." I wrote a little something myself. Enjoy if you like. Always ~LINDA~
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 4/21/2016 4:41:00 AM
Thank you very much for your kind consideration and congratulations, Linda. I will be sure to stop by your blog.
Date: 4/15/2016 6:48:00 PM
very interesting perception of the picture. I too was thinking on the lines of daisies and innocence. but still not sure where to go with it!
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 4/15/2016 9:14:00 PM
It's where my pen decided to go this time. Looking forward to your interpretation Andrea. Thank you for your support!
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