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Unplanned pregnancy...I guess it could be called a bit of a cock up! 7th April 2015
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Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
October 8, 2016 at 9:43 PM
I picked this one out based on the title and the style....and oh Wow...had no idea what I was in for! Quite comical Jan. Nice Monoku here LOL! MC
Devnath  Avatar
April 18, 2015 at 4:34 PM
A creative and practical monoku beautifully done. Humorous one. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
Allison Avatar
April 18, 2015 at 4:40 PM
funny in one way BL but sad in another I guess:-) Hugs jan xx
Strauss Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 9:53 PM
This happens every time... so sad.
Allison Avatar
April 9, 2015 at 1:36 AM
It does Lei! Hugs Jan xx
Yvonne Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 7:27 PM
What is really sad about this photo...well sad for me anyways is that they used a mold of mine to design that pregnancy test stick. I guess that's why you used the line "a 'bit' of a cock up" and maybe that's why I drive the largest Hummer they sell. Great monoku Jan! By the way I'm just kidding. I don't drive a Hummer!
Allison Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 7:32 PM
You crease me up my friend - no matter how tough life is for us you always have the ability to make me smile:-) thank you for being a part of my life:-) Hugs Jan xx
Fraser Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 3:10 PM
Love the party naked comment from Janet. One day I desire to party naked, and dream the next nine months :-) hugs always Jan, James xx
Allison Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 3:15 PM
I hope your dreams come true my friend:-) Hugs jan xx
Horn Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 5:46 AM
Did you know that the further the end sticks out the more likely there well be twins? Also, those who are the poorest spellers in school have the biggest likelihood of become spell-bound when adults. Great things are bound to happen in Great Britain. That is why we Americans always like going to Great Britain. Jim Horn aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa bbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb cccccccccccccccccc ddddddddddddd eeeeeeeeeee ffffffffffffff gggggg hhhh ii j
Allison Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 5:51 AM
Thanks for your insightful comment James:-) Jan x
Hunjeri Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 4:48 AM
Lol Jan. This is good. My kind of stuff. Hahaha...
Allison Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 5:50 AM
Thank Njeri:-) hugs jan xx
Sathasivam Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 2:57 AM
Interesting thought. Enjoyed.
Allison Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 3:20 AM
Thanks Ravi:-) hugs jan x
Turner Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 2:08 AM
Hi, Jan thanks for the soup mail. Love poem.
Allison Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 2:14 AM
Thanks Deborah - hugs Jan xx
Kiser Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 2:04 AM
That about sums it all up!
Allison Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 2:06 AM
thanks ML lovely to see you back:-) Hugs jan xx
Roper Avatar
April 7, 2015 at 10:56 PM
Oh, my goodness, I hope your not "P". I'm with Janet !!!! Shit does happen when your having fun. :) Blessings dear friend
Allison Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 2:05 AM
Eve me pregnant - now that really would be a miracle! Hugs jan xx
Cervenka Avatar
April 7, 2015 at 6:55 PM
ohhh you are so bad today!! But in my mothers infamous words, "Sh!t happens when you party naked." PS these were words said to me when I told her that my fiance (now husband) were having a baby. Definitely doesn't have to be a tragedy, my Hannah is a blessing to us all with her huge hart and willingness to help anyone.
Allison Avatar
April 7, 2015 at 7:03 PM
me bad Janet - noooooooooo it must be my alter ego Stan who is on here lol - I agree with you once the initial shock has sunk it it can be a blessing in disguise:-) hugs jan xx
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