Oops

The laxatives were mighty strong;
she thought she'd fart, but she was wrong...


for L Milton's contest

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Jan Allison

Date: 12/14/2021 4:31:00 PM

you know me for poop humour i would have put this at the top lol :-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 12/8/2021 1:39:00 PM

Oh dear! Congratulations on your win. Blessings, Paulette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/7/2021 3:12:00 PM

big Congrats, Jack and well deserved.

Beata Agustin

Date: 12/6/2021 10:34:00 PM

Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... wise observation in witty poetic lines. God bless you.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/6/2021 9:05:00 AM

Ewwww! Pass the air freshener. CONGRATS, Jack! Janice

Christuraj Alex

Date: 12/6/2021 4:26:00 AM

Wonderfully hilarious! Congratulations!

Terry Flood

Date: 12/6/2021 12:59:00 AM

Oops, indeed. Hope she wasn’t in her best frilly whites. Congrats Jack. Terry

John Watt

Date: 12/5/2021 10:26:00 PM

Mary had a little clock / she swallowed it one day / she took a nice strong laxative / to pass the time away. Funny couplet, Jack... congrats.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/5/2021 5:39:00 PM

Yikes…lol! Congratulations!

L Milton Hankins

Date: 12/5/2021 5:16:00 PM

Jack, this went right along with the theme many people were talking about on PS during the contest. Nice write. Congratulations!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/14/2021 11:58:00 AM

Happens to the best of us. Laughter the best medicine. I should begin to feel better. Sara

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/8/2021 10:26:00 PM

Haha! Your poem is hilarious, Jack. Such a great title too!! Thanks for the giggle, my witty friend.. ~Susan

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/3/2021 9:14:00 AM

HaHa, great sense of humor and it will definitely stand in good stead in the contest - good luck Jack. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Paul Callus

Date: 9/29/2021 9:42:00 AM

This one should have placed quite high on the winners list, Jack! The results of the laxatives arrived without any warning at all!! ~ Best regards, my friend. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/28/2021 5:50:00 PM

hahaha. GREAT couplet. (I just noticed from the winner list his favorite types of couplets are ones that employ beautiful imagery)

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/28/2021 1:56:00 AM

Lol! Jack, This is hilarious and a good entry for the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis