Oooahwa

I awoke in an icy hot sweat, Fearing;
Oooahwa, hovered over me, Sneering.
Had no shape, had no form, Amazing;
Out of his mouth his words, Blazing.
His fiery words burnt into my soul
Oooahwa to me his life did scroll.
I nod my head as I understand, Aching;
I'm scared to death my body's, Shaking.
Oooahwa breathes,lifeless breath,Giving;
Those around him,lifeless death, Living.
Oooahwa,no respect for dying.bravely
Those who knew said he died, knavely.
The ghastly darkness of his soul Reaching
His audible silence,to me keeps Preaching
Oooahwa's ominous silhouette Teaching
His hellish hand on my soul,was Bleaching
All of a sudden my mortal mind reeling
My arms,legs,and body dead,no feeling.
He awoke in an icy hot sweat, Fearing:
I hovered over him Sneering; Yes SNEERING
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Breidenthal Avatar
January 5, 2012 at 7:04 PM
Hello! Thank you for all of the inspiring comments you are bestowing upon me. It means a lot to me. :) I really liked this poem! Every word is gripping to the soul. Always, Laura
Guzzi Avatar
December 7, 2008 at 4:46 PM
YES! Who is God? Who is the bad guy! Turn about has always been fair play. There's a bit of yin in yang and visa versa..nice twist!
Gorelick Avatar
December 7, 2008 at 4:37 PM
I'm not sure i got it..but I sure enjoyed reading it. BG
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