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Onyx

O h! Chalcedony stone dyed ebony
N ow newly formed and glistening upon the ring
Y our beauty thrilled the lovely lady
X in the center, diamond filled, unique engagement ring  

Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich
Contest: Four Letter Words: An Acrostic Challenge

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/5/2013 3:57:00 PM

Sara, this is a good one.. congrats,,,Linda

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 9/3/2013 7:25:00 PM

You did great with the challenge! A unique ring indeed as well as write! Well done! Hugs

Skat A

Date: 9/1/2013 2:02:00 PM

Sara, , congratulations on your acrostic win. ~ SKAT

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/1/2013 1:56:00 PM

Sara, congrats on your win with this descriptive acrostic! Love, Kim

Donna Jones

Date: 9/1/2013 8:14:00 AM

You took on a tough one Sara and it is awesome...congratulations.. :-)

Sandra Adams

Date: 8/31/2013 8:18:00 PM

beautifully done...congrats on your win :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/31/2013 5:48:00 PM

VERY nice. You chose a word nobody else did, and you came up with a great way to use the X. Congrats, Sara.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/29/2013 3:40:00 PM

Ohhh real good one Andie's bound to swoon & you win! Light & Love

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/27/2013 7:11:00 AM

That's one of the more difficult 4 letter words that Andrea gave in her list, it's nice to see this one being used...I don't think I've seen this particular word used yet! I really enjoyed reading this awesome poem this morning! You have enlightened me with this lovely write! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/27/2013 8:46:00 AM

I agree not so easy..It was a challenge..Sara

Onyx

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