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Onslaught

I don't think the world is ready for my onslaught, I'm about to wreak havoc My sanest moment was embracing my madness How can I lose my mind if I never had it? I'm more than a savage, less than the baddest I'm not the greatest writer but I'm better than the average I write carefully but my pen attacks every page My pen does more damage than Jason Voorhees's Machete blade Competing with my Pen's difficult A tortured artist who wants his words heard while being invisible Write over a thousand rhymes a day but in person I never speak I'm not a poet, I just rhyme well and make letters meet A world without the Kardashian's would be heavenly Because of lines like that, my work may never be considered legendary Cupid when you're ready, put me and Demi Lovato together please If not Demi, then Ariana Grande, and I'll never look at another women again I'll put down the pad and break every pen I've learned not every line will be perfect, so I'm putting my worst ones here Usually I pour my heart on the page and leave my verse in tears Even with the obstacles and demons I face I'll still persevere I'm tired of love and need to change the type of girls I've been Dating with I need something more than hook ups and trading pics So I'm staying single until Ariana Grande & Demi Lovato agree to share me for a three way relationship Share me for 3 days each, then have Sunday off to rest Don't hate me for hoping for the best I've learned to laugh off pain and find comfort in what used to leave me distraught This is my onslaught

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/19/2017 10:52:00 PM
thanks it took me back to the good old days with RUN D.M.C & Grandmaster Flash with Mellie Mel. Times when old school was in progress some how we lost touch with that vibe. We need to bring thoughts like that in a form of raps and poetry. Society is drifting into a cesspool of their new swing. See I like Fetty Wap but some people don't understand them. You can't please everyone. Thanks for the compliment I really appreciate it from the heart... Poet Mario William Vitale 8/19/17
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Alex Duffy
Date: 8/27/2017 4:20:00 PM
Thank you, I love Run DMC, Grandmaster flash & Mellie Mel, Nas, Cube, Rakim, Big Pun, Eminem, Some of my biggest influences, Old school Hip-Hop was so soulful and powerful, full of emotion, storytelling & raw truth, I agree poetry & rap needs more of it now aswell, Variety is good, but these days 95% of Hip-Hop sounds the same, glad you enjoyed it, thank you

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