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Onomatopoeia Monorhyme

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One or more words that make the sound as you speak N Oink is an example and so are squeal and squeak M A T Ouch! You’d exclaim if pinched by a sneak P Outstanding is this creative language technique E I A Kim’s Acrostic Play Contest 11/09/20

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/2/2020 12:46:00 PM

Back with hand stands, cartwheels and high fives of congratulations for your win with your rollicking and very clever poem! Hugs

Terry Flood

Date: 11/25/2020 10:53:00 AM

Well done, Jan. I was gonna use this word myself as its a song title on my fave groups latest album. Kept drawing a blank though. Congrats on your win.

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/25/2020 7:12:00 AM

Hi Jan, I’m just coming back to congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/25/2020 6:51:00 AM

Very fun and informative too! Congrats, Jan, on first place!

Paul Callus

Date: 11/12/2020 1:04:00 PM

Kim will definitely like this one, Jan! Your creativity shines:) Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 11/12/2020 4:00:00 PM

thanks my friend:-) hugs jan xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 11/10/2020 11:31:00 AM

Well done! Love the way your mind works! You must be a riot in the plub! Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison
Date: 11/11/2020 4:23:00 AM

Lol I am quite shy and quiet in real life... can let my imagination flow with my silly poetry:-) hugs Jan xx

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/10/2020 8:37:00 AM

A lot of fun a lot of creativity, a clever write - a Greek word - all about the formation of a word from sound associated with what is named (e.g bark-dog, hiss - snake, roar - lion). Good luck Jan, hugs and blessings Jennifer.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/11/2020 4:22:00 AM

Thanks jennifer:-)Hugs Jan xx

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/10/2020 4:52:00 AM

Love this, Jan... a sure winner :) God bless you with many more

Jan Allison
Date: 11/10/2020 12:48:00 PM

I hope the sponsor likes it:-) thanks Regina:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 11/9/2020 8:49:00 PM

Awesome verse, Jan, a winner for sure. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve

Jan Allison
Date: 11/10/2020 12:48:00 PM

thanks Eve:-) hugs jan xx

John Watt

Date: 11/9/2020 8:30:00 PM

Jan, I so loved your Onomatopoeia poem, including actual examples and monorhyme. You inspired me to do a limerick for Kim's contest, so thank you! Be well my friend. Hugs ~ John

Jan Allison
Date: 11/10/2020 12:47:00 PM

thanks John, I've just read your entry wish I'd thought of it!!!:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/9/2020 5:45:00 PM

Hi Jan, This looks like a lot of fun. I found it to be clever and creative as well. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have a wonderful evening:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 11/10/2020 12:47:00 PM

thanks Alexis:-) hugs jan xx

Akkina Downing

Date: 11/9/2020 4:35:00 PM

You got some awesome creativity here, Jan. It’s great and good luck in the contest :)

Jan Allison
Date: 11/10/2020 12:06:00 PM

thanks Akkina, lovely to see you back on the site, so sorry you have had trouble with bullying... seems quite a few of us have been subjected to it on the site, have recently done a poem about it:-( hugs jan xx

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/9/2020 2:35:00 PM

Too much fun my friend - very clever and creative! Roaring best wishes in the contest! hugs...

Jan Allison
Date: 11/9/2020 2:57:00 PM

Thanks Sam it was such fun to try the challenge:-) hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 11/9/2020 1:46:00 PM

what a fun poem, jan! best of luck in the contest...

Jan Allison
Date: 11/9/2020 1:46:00 PM

Thanks Ilene, it was am interesting contest to write for:-) hugs Jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/9/2020 1:02:00 PM

A delightful acrostic, Jan! Onomatopoeia can add humor to poetry as well as prose. There was a James Joyce novel that began with "Moo, cow, moo." Enjoyed reading your entry and wish you success in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Jan Allison
Date: 11/9/2020 1:11:00 PM

Thanks Carolyn:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/9/2020 12:07:00 PM

- Yes this is a creative technique, Jan - best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 11/9/2020 12:08:00 PM

Thanks Anne-Lise it was fun to try the form Kim has invented for us:-) hugs jan xx