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Onomatopoeia Monorhyme

One or more words that make the sound as you speak
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Oink is an example and so are squeal and squeak
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Ouch!  You’d exclaim if pinched by a sneak
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Outstanding is this creative language technique
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Kim’s Acrostic Play Contest


11/09/20
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Kauffman Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 12:46 PM
Back with hand stands, cartwheels and high fives of congratulations for your win with your rollicking and very clever poem! Hugs
Flood Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 10:53 AM
Well done, Jan. I was gonna use this word myself as its a song title on my fave groups latest album. Kept drawing a blank though. Congrats on your win.
Y. Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 7:12 AM
Hi Jan, I’m just coming back to congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Rodrigues Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 6:51 AM
Very fun and informative too! Congrats, Jan, on first place!
Callus Avatar
November 12, 2020 at 1:04 PM
Kim will definitely like this one, Jan! Your creativity shines:) Hugs // paul
Allison Avatar
November 12, 2020 at 4:00 PM
thanks my friend:-) hugs jan xx
Leffanta Avatar
November 10, 2020 at 11:31 AM
Well done! Love the way your mind works! You must be a riot in the plub! Aloha! Rico
Allison Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 4:23 AM
Lol I am quite shy and quiet in real life... can let my imagination flow with my silly poetry:-) hugs Jan xx
Proxenos Avatar
November 10, 2020 at 8:37 AM
A lot of fun a lot of creativity, a clever write - a Greek word - all about the formation of a word from sound associated with what is named (e.g bark-dog, hiss - snake, roar - lion). Good luck Jan, hugs and blessings Jennifer.
Allison Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 4:22 AM
Thanks jennifer:-)Hugs Jan xx
Mcintosh Avatar
November 10, 2020 at 4:52 AM
Love this, Jan... a sure winner :) God bless you with many more
Allison Avatar
November 10, 2020 at 12:48 PM
I hope the sponsor likes it:-) thanks Regina:-) hugs jan xx
Roper Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 8:49 PM
Awesome verse, Jan, a winner for sure. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
Allison Avatar
November 10, 2020 at 12:48 PM
thanks Eve:-) hugs jan xx
Watt Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 8:30 PM
Jan, I so loved your Onomatopoeia poem, including actual examples and monorhyme. You inspired me to do a limerick for Kim's contest, so thank you! Be well my friend. Hugs ~ John
Allison Avatar
November 10, 2020 at 12:47 PM
thanks John, I've just read your entry wish I'd thought of it!!!:-) hugs Jan xx
Y. Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 5:45 PM
Hi Jan, This looks like a lot of fun. I found it to be clever and creative as well. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have a wonderful evening:-) Alexis
Allison Avatar
November 10, 2020 at 12:47 PM
thanks Alexis:-) hugs jan xx
Downing  Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 4:35 PM
You got some awesome creativity here, Jan. It’s great and good luck in the contest :)
Allison Avatar
November 10, 2020 at 12:06 PM
thanks Akkina, lovely to see you back on the site, so sorry you have had trouble with bullying... seems quite a few of us have been subjected to it on the site, have recently done a poem about it:-( hugs jan xx
Kauffman Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 2:35 PM
Too much fun my friend - very clever and creative! Roaring best wishes in the contest! hugs...
Allison Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 2:57 PM
Thanks Sam it was such fun to try the challenge:-) hugs jan xx
Bauer Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 1:46 PM
what a fun poem, jan! best of luck in the contest...
Allison Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 1:46 PM
Thanks Ilene, it was am interesting contest to write for:-) hugs Jan xx
Devonshire Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 1:02 PM
A delightful acrostic, Jan! Onomatopoeia can add humor to poetry as well as prose. There was a James Joyce novel that began with "Moo, cow, moo." Enjoyed reading your entry and wish you success in the contest! Love, Carolyn
Allison Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 1:11 PM
Thanks Carolyn:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 12:07 PM
- Yes this is a creative technique, Jan - best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 12:08 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise it was fun to try the form Kim has invented for us:-) hugs jan xx
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