Liam Mcdaid Poet Free verse

Only You Babe

Tasting delights softly captured
in a keyhole of thoughts 
warmly smiling
radiates within one porthole 
Outside the mind
opening this heart sweetly yawning 
twilight dawning .

Clouds shades red blushing desire
fading to amber 
going further out from the sun
turning shades 
from gun barrel grey to black 
setting our scene.

kissing outside in 
thinking of your beauty love 
Licking deeply tongues on fire 
warm fluttering rays
hotly kissing each beat
burning passion erupting inside desires.

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Ken Carroll October 25, 2014 at 12:36 AM Awesome sensual write Liam old buddy..Thank you for your kind visits to my verse! Liam Mcdaid October 25, 2014 at 12:59 AM i wrote this ken for someone really special you know me pal like yourself thank you kindly for the wonderful comment pal bless you

Cherl Dunn October 24, 2014 at 6:19 PM A warm expressive work of passion and emotion, excellectly portraited in your write nice job, and thanks for your comments on my poems Liam Mcdaid October 24, 2014 at 7:02 PM ah cherl smiling really beautiful comment and your poems always a pleasure to read

Gary Bateman October 24, 2014 at 3:54 PM Liam . . . Okay Mate!! -- You stunned me here with the sensual imagery and the hearts' a fire passion you've portrayed in this wonderfully scripted write!! Most Excellent and a "7" and a FAV. Cheers and Spill Ink!! Gary Liam Mcdaid October 24, 2014 at 7:13 PM ah gary your a pal really brought a big smile wonderful comment dear friend heartfelt appreciated

Dorian Petersen Potter October 24, 2014 at 12:18 PM Very nicely penned from your beautiful heart and soul my dear friend Liam. :) enjoyed it! Have a great weekend! Take care. Hugs! love and light! xxx D. Liam Mcdaid October 24, 2014 at 12:46 PM dorian you also have a wonderful weekend thank you so kindly wonderful comment deeply appreciated bless you

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty October 24, 2014 at 6:43 AM love and nature blended together ---- "keyhole of thoughts" "red blushing desire fading to amber ""Licking deeply tongues on fire" these are enormous lines, liam. You are a profound poet of love and nature. You have developed your own style. Much much love and I bow to your talent. Liam Mcdaid October 24, 2014 at 9:45 AM thank you deeply rajat for such a beautiful comment dear friend heartfelt appreciated bless you

Demetrios Trifiatis October 24, 2014 at 6:41 AM You set the heart aflame my friend, Liam! Sizzling! Liam Mcdaid October 24, 2014 at 8:25 AM oh the hearts flaming smiling demetrios wonderful comment deeply appreciated dear friend

Jan Allison October 24, 2014 at 3:33 AM what a passionate write Lima you write these poems so brilliantly Hugs Jan xxx Liam Mcdaid October 24, 2014 at 4:57 AM i can only write jan what the heart tells me smiling thank you kindly dear friend wonderful comment deeply appreciated

BE Bailey October 24, 2014 at 3:13 AM Well done Liam. I love this poem and how you wrote it with so much emotion shining through. Have a great weekend "B" Liam Mcdaid October 24, 2014 at 4:51 AM yeah i always draw with my feelings smiling you also have an excellent weekend thank you kindly for the wonderful comment

Tim Smith October 23, 2014 at 11:21 PM That last verse just explodes off the page liam.....well done Tim Liam Mcdaid October 24, 2014 at 4:47 AM smiling tim wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated

Charmaine Chircop October 23, 2014 at 9:04 PM A very passionate poem-'Clouds shades red blushing desire fading to amber ,from gun barrel grey to black,a keyhole of thoughts'..I llove these descriptions Liam-Wow Liam Mcdaid October 24, 2014 at 4:43 AM thank you charmaine so sweet dear friend bless you truly dazzling comment