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Only You Babe

Tasting delights softly captured in a keyhole of thoughts warmly smiling radiates within one porthole Outside the mind opening this heart sweetly yawning twilight dawning . Clouds shades red blushing desire fading to amber going further out from the sun turning shades from gun barrel grey to black setting our scene. kissing outside in thinking of your beauty love Licking deeply tongues on fire warm fluttering rays hotly kissing each beat burning passion erupting inside desires.

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Ken Carroll

Date: 10/25/2014 12:36:00 AM

Awesome sensual write Liam old buddy..Thank you for your kind visits to my verse!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/25/2014 12:59:00 AM

i wrote this ken for someone really special you know me pal like yourself thank you kindly for the wonderful comment pal bless you

Cherl Dunn

Date: 10/24/2014 6:19:00 PM

A warm expressive work of passion and emotion, excellectly portraited in your write nice job, and thanks for your comments on my poems

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/24/2014 7:02:00 PM

ah cherl smiling really beautiful comment and your poems always a pleasure to read

Gary Bateman

Date: 10/24/2014 3:54:00 PM

Liam . . . Okay Mate!! -- You stunned me here with the sensual imagery and the hearts' a fire passion you've portrayed in this wonderfully scripted write!! Most Excellent and a "7" and a FAV. Cheers and Spill Ink!! Gary

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/24/2014 7:13:00 PM

ah gary your a pal really brought a big smile wonderful comment dear friend heartfelt appreciated

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 10/24/2014 12:18:00 PM

Very nicely penned from your beautiful heart and soul my dear friend Liam. :) enjoyed it! Have a great weekend! Take care. Hugs! love and light! xxx D.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/24/2014 12:46:00 PM

dorian you also have a wonderful weekend thank you so kindly wonderful comment deeply appreciated bless you

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 10/24/2014 6:43:00 AM

love and nature blended together ---- "keyhole of thoughts" "red blushing desire fading to amber ""Licking deeply tongues on fire" these are enormous lines, liam. You are a profound poet of love and nature. You have developed your own style. Much much love and I bow to your talent.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/24/2014 9:45:00 AM

thank you deeply rajat for such a beautiful comment dear friend heartfelt appreciated bless you

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/24/2014 6:41:00 AM

You set the heart aflame my friend, Liam! Sizzling!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/24/2014 8:25:00 AM

oh the hearts flaming smiling demetrios wonderful comment deeply appreciated dear friend

Jan Allison

Date: 10/24/2014 3:33:00 AM

what a passionate write Lima you write these poems so brilliantly Hugs Jan xxx

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/24/2014 4:57:00 AM

i can only write jan what the heart tells me smiling thank you kindly dear friend wonderful comment deeply appreciated

BE Bailey

Date: 10/24/2014 3:13:00 AM

Well done Liam. I love this poem and how you wrote it with so much emotion shining through. Have a great weekend "B"

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/24/2014 4:51:00 AM

yeah i always draw with my feelings smiling you also have an excellent weekend thank you kindly for the wonderful comment

Tim Smith

Date: 10/23/2014 11:21:00 PM

That last verse just explodes off the page liam.....well done Tim

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/24/2014 4:47:00 AM

smiling tim wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/23/2014 9:04:00 PM

A very passionate poem-'Clouds shades red blushing desire fading to amber ,from gun barrel grey to black,a keyhole of thoughts'..I llove these descriptions Liam-Wow

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/24/2014 4:43:00 AM

thank you charmaine so sweet dear friend bless you truly dazzling comment