Only You and Me

The garden curled around us as we sat beneath the stars,
In the silver shine of Venus and the rust red glow of Mars.
The brandy was between us and we toasted life and love,
While the moon conducted music from the dark green leaves above.
In the cold grey light of morning we may think things diff'rently,
In the moonlight, in the garden, there was only you and me.
 
Vintage brandy in the bottle seemed to ask us both to drink
And the flowers that were watching clearly knew what they should think.
Then your glass was finally empty and you laid it to one side
While you closed your eyes and kissed me and the barn owl tried to hide.
In the cold grey light of morning we may think things diff'rently,
In the moonlight, in the garden, there was only you and me.
 
There was silence in my city as your lips were joined to mine
And I tasted all of heaven and a little brandy wine.
As our bodies settled closer and we melted into one
With embarrassed little giggles that were sure to signal fun.
In the cold grey light of morning we may think things diff'rently,
In the moonlight, in the garden, there was only you and me.

So we gathered up the glasses and we put the stars to bed
Then we walked along the garden path, my shoulder 'neath your head.
We pulled each other closer and we whispered with our hands
That tonight is all that matters and the whole world understands.
In the cold grey light of morning we may think things diff'rently,
In the moonlight, in the garden, there was only you and me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 6/30/2010 3:39:00 PM
and from out of my dreams came... a write that blows my mind; fantastic Jeff Green.
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Date: 6/6/2010 5:11:00 AM
Wonderful poem... Well written, and romantic! Congratulations on your winning
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Date: 3/20/2010 7:39:00 AM
Congratulations my Knight. Another masterpiece from quill Jem
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Date: 3/14/2010 8:35:00 AM
Beautiful poetry here Mr. Green !! Congratulations on you win here !!! Very romantic indeed ! james
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Date: 3/6/2010 3:48:00 PM
very romantic - lovely and gentle. K
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Date: 3/5/2010 1:31:00 PM
My congratulations on your win in the PS's Intl. Poetry Contest!
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Date: 3/3/2010 11:44:00 PM
Poets are indeed romantic. I enjoyed the read. Congratulations. Ernilando
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Date: 3/3/2010 8:16:00 AM
so romantic, beautiful and emotional, congrats
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Date: 3/2/2010 5:25:00 AM
Jeff - congratulations on being featured! Awesome poem. Keep writing. Kelly
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Date: 3/1/2010 9:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the October 2009 PoetrySoup International Poetry Site Contest Jeff. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/1/2010 6:27:00 AM
congrats on the featured poem!! Good work!!
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Date: 2/28/2010 5:26:00 PM
Nice use of imagery to share this story. Congratulations on being one of the winners in the Soup contest. Enjoy your success. Wishing you many more. Karen
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Date: 1/20/2010 9:51:00 AM
this is my kind of poetry. very nice
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Date: 12/27/2009 9:11:00 AM
Congratulations on being a first round winner and good luck in the semi finals. Caryl
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Date: 12/22/2009 12:09:00 PM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor and the best to you in the finals Jeff. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 9:05:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 10:17:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 12/9/2009 11:39:00 AM
Many congrats on your beautiful featured poem this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 12/9/2009 2:50:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. Nutter
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Date: 12/8/2009 4:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Jeff. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/7/2009 12:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured >> James
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Date: 12/7/2009 12:03:00 AM
Congrats on your featured poem! ***Danielle***
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Date: 12/6/2009 4:53:00 PM
congrats on being featured..I really like this :) JB
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Date: 4/2/2009 7:02:00 PM
What beautiful thoughts, conveyed so well by your artistic pen. This poem takes the reader on a magical journey filled with love. Awesome, Jeff!
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Date: 4/2/2009 2:03:00 PM
Welcome to poetry soup, may I have an invite to the good life you celebrate in words so well
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