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Only You

~Only You~ (Free Style) My darling you make my heart beat so fast Racing with Loving thoughts all the time of you. You have not the faintest idea of how you make me feel Right in my heart and mind day in and day out is only you. You've changed me in many ways with you my Love my heart sings and in love with you know I am day in and day out is only you. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014 December,17,2014
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Kiser Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 4:33 PM
A beautiful and loving work of art.
Swana  Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 8:17 PM
You words are palpable Im able to feel the emotions your poem empresses impressive work :)
Petersen Potter Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 12:07 AM
Hi Gerald thank you so much for your very awesome comments, your words are palpable too dear friend. Much appreciated it! I like your rap, awesome. Will come back to read you more very soon. Wish you a very Merry Christmas and your family! Have a lovely evening! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
Dunn Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 5:44 PM
Dorian, love this one it reeks with the power and passion of a youthful heart that is you, my young lady poet great job, cheri
Petersen Potter Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 12:12 AM
Dear Cherl, thank you so much so kindly for your very nice thoughts greatly appreciated by me always dear friend. Will be visiting you very soon dear.Wish you a very Merry Christmas and your family! Have a very lovely evening! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.
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