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Only Touch Can Sight

My “I Do” vow also pledged me to urine somehow. My kids, pets and more have stores of pee upsets - scores of dried tinkle spots only visible with miracles! I can’t see cat wee in houseplant dirt but I can and do threaten viewable feline hurt. I have wetting weapon grandpa who dinks ink on his pads making sheet stinks in reek spots corneas cannot seek. Cat closet wiz where hangs a boutique is the worst, the gold may be dried jets folded in garb, purses or belts. Only touch can sight whiz biz and then, only if it's wet. ... CayCay July 14, 2019

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Date: 8/6/2019 7:21:00 PM
You alway find the most unique ways to express the happenings and in tasteful humorous ways CayCay. I'm not surprised that this is on the winners list. Big congratulations for your deserving win! xxoo
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Date: 7/21/2019 11:54:00 AM
Lol! I relate all too well to this one ;D Between my dog, Rose Puddles, who can't hold her pee, and my sleepwalking honey who pees in the strangest places... Shh don't tell ;), Congrats on your win! xomo
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Date: 7/21/2019 10:32:00 AM
I love it when you enter my contests, because your poems grow with every read, and when judging, I probably have read each of the winners at least ten times by the time I finalise! Yours deliver something new each read. This one also delivered a lot of wee. Is that a good thing? You’d think not. I have enough wee to deal with in my life. But still, here you are at number seven. So weeee in a good waaaay!
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Date: 7/20/2019 9:48:00 AM
Oh my CayCay...this is such a hoot. Congrats on your wonderful placement!
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Date: 7/20/2019 8:20:00 AM
CayCay , CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win. LOL! Janice
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Date: 7/20/2019 6:24:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this interesting perspective on "gold".
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Date: 7/16/2019 6:57:00 PM
After your-analysis of this remarkable topic, I am simply speechless. G.L. in the contest with this most unique write! :) gw
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Date: 7/16/2019 6:00:00 PM
oh my, such a disaster, Caycay!! It was the same with my basement till Joe accidentally flooded it last month and we ripped out that carpet. The cat pee can't be around any more to stink up the basement because it's just cement again! Good luck in the contest. The image i enjoyed best in your poem were the lines with cat closet wiz and cat wee. Such creative phrases for pee.
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Date: 7/16/2019 3:32:00 PM
I have a memory of visiting some old lady whose house smelled of cat urine. I sneezed and politely left. Your poem reminded me of that. Quite humorous verse and I bet the sponsor will love it. Best of luck. Poetic hugs.
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Date: 7/16/2019 1:50:00 PM
Clever idea for the contest....I am an animal lover, and know that accidents can happen....i would be besides myself if they started going on everything i owned, but i know some people have that problem! Good luck in the contest! :) hugs
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Date: 7/16/2019 1:12:00 PM
CayCay, I have been an carpet installer for years before opening up my own store. You have no idea how many times I have come across cat and dog urine (lol) I hated that part of ripping up existing filthy carpets, but I do love cats and I do love dogs...And I also love this poem. Good luck in the contest...Best Wishes and warm hugs...Charlie
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