Only the Strong Survive

Stopped at the rest stop with my friend Seth,

He just made the restroom, out of breath!

Came out gasping for air,

Yo Bud!...Don't go in there!

This "Turlet" has the foul smell of "Death!"


I thought I'd sniff about..just for fun!

The pungence hit...and my head just spun!

Bordering on manic,

Seth was in a panic!

Yo Bud!...Could you PLEASE call 9-1-1?
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September 5, 2025 at 4:08 AM
I can't exactly decide which way this one is going. I am thinking someone was dead in one of the boxed in toilets or it could be meant to be something else. Some good writing when it leaves a person guessing. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K
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